Comments | crazycatt71: Fever

crazycatt71

Jun 06, 2012 09:18

Title: Fever
Author: crazycatt71
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Prompt: Table #3- prompt 5

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Comments 9

bluelilacs June 6 2012, 17:31:29 UTC

You could almost see them smouldering, the steam rising off of each of them and the fire in their eyes.

Very hot. Nicely done.

crazycatt71 June 6 2012, 19:03:16 UTC

Thanks

iantojjackh June 6 2012, 20:13:53 UTC

Meow!! That is hot and steamy can feel the passion burning off the page.

crazycatt71 June 6 2012, 21:17:06 UTC

*fans the flames back so you don't get burned*

owensheart June 7 2012, 09:03:42 UTC

The imagery in this is fantastic. Great work.

crazycatt71 June 7 2012, 15:12:42 UTC

Thanks

excentric397 June 7 2012, 11:43:27 UTC

Whew!!!

badly_knitted June 7 2012, 21:09:36 UTC

Oh yeah, a lovely way to burn!

Very visual, which I love. I could see it all in my head. =)

crazycatt71 June 8 2012, 00:16:55 UTC

Cool, I always hope whoever reads what I've written, can see what I'm visualizing when I'm writting it.