Comments | crazybeagle: Fullmetal Alchemist: Choose Your Own Author- The Desert Ague (EdWin, Jerso, teen, part 1/?)

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Fullmetal Alchemist: Choose Your Own Author- The Desert Ague (EdWin, Jerso, teen, part 1/?)

Jun 20, 2012 15:45

Title: The Desert Ague
Author: crazybeagle
Rating: T for innuendo/language
Prompt: I would like some hurt/comfort with Ed in Creta or some other country in the east. Het please, but nothing explicit.....I'm looking for hurt/comfort with some sexy twists. Don't take yourself too seriously, if you can put in a few bits of comedy, I'd love it, but it's OK if you ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

elasg June 21 2012, 01:19:21 UTC

OMG! OMG! It's my prompt! (((HUGS!!)) I've been away at a meeting and wasn't checking in regularly so I only just saw this! Must read!

crazybeagle June 21 2012, 02:07:03 UTC

WELL I HOPE YOU ENJOY IT. :D And thanks for the patience regarding its lateness and incompleteness. It'll be done soon, I promise, and I have a bunch of fun parts to write coming up.

elasg June 21 2012, 03:16:19 UTC

Oh no worries at all! I'm still working on my art piece too. Finished up the lineart tonight though! And now I have something nice to settle into bed with! Thank you!

elasg June 21 2012, 10:49:31 UTC

Excellent start! I like this VERY much! You've shown that uselessness that I was certain Ed would feel not having his alchemy anymore and have kept him in character besides. It's a great start and I can't wait to read the rest! Thank you SOOO much!

crazybeagle June 21 2012, 19:59:13 UTC

I'm so glad you're liking it so far....I was really concerned about this one because I'm completely out of my realm of experience both with EdWin and with Older!Ed. You're perfectly welcome, and now I get to hunker down and put Ed through some hell in the desert itself...muhaha....

dzioo June 21 2012, 11:23:21 UTC

wow, that was.... ok, there's not much action here, but damn, that was intense O_O so many feelings in this, regarding both Ed's terrible condition and his inner conflict. it's funny how he thought of spending all his life with her but it didn't occur to him that she'd want to marry him, LOL^^; I just hope he's going to be ok. aaand that you explain how Li died and if they ever make it to Ling's coronation^^; I'd love to know his reaction to seeing his old friends on such important day^^ great piece! can't wait to read more of it!

crazybeagle June 21 2012, 20:02:10 UTC

I'm very glad you're interested so far. Yes, yes, not telling you about Li or the coronation is all part of my evil plan to keep you reading....muhaha....
And yes, I concur about the proposal thing. Darling Ed can be very dense sometimes. XD
And I'm glad that you enjoyed it in spite of the fact that this really was just the setup-chapter for all the actual action. ^_^ Stay tuned! And your icon's superb.

Oh, by the way, I stuck the fanart you did for Quarantine on Tumblr and linked it back to your LJ, and people absolutely loved it. To my knowledge it has sixty-something likes/reblogs at the moment.

dzioo June 22 2012, 10:22:20 UTC

yes yes, keep writing, I very much want to find it out the hard way 8D

he can. or maybe it's just a guy thing. they're all willing to spend the rest of their life with one woman, but the idea of making it LEGAL, suddenly seems so terrifying. I don't really understand why...

hehe I will, you can be sure of it! and that's what I imagine as Ling's face when he sees Ed reach the coronation^^; gosh, their friendship is so cute <3

................... ;;_______;; omg, thank you so much, I just found that post ;_; I had no idea you've done that and OMG, so many amazing notes ;_; thankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!