Hush Little Baby 8

[crazyamoeba]

Summary: Something is bothering Cloud, but the blond won't say a word.
Rating: Mature for adult themes.
Warnings: Vague descriptions of past violence etc, but nothing very graphic.
Characters: Zack, Cloud, Sephiroth, others as they pop up.
Disclaimer: I don't own any part of FFVII, nor do I make money out of this.

Comments

[ldyavalon]

OMG!!! Poor, poor Cloud. I sincerely hope Zack manages to get through to him *huggles Cloud close*

[karadin]

This needs some warnings on it, (sexual abuse, underage if Cloud is underage) the timeline in FFVII, a pairing if there is one, and if you are posting a multi-chapter fic, links to previous chapters is always recommended, and a word count is also nice for those who want to wait for longer chapters.

[etrix]

I'm going to have to go back and start this fic from the beginning, although it sounds kinda familiar.

BBL to give you a proper review.

[pipi87]

The woods are burning, and everything is crumbling around him while he desperately tries to keep it together. His sand castle is falling down, battered by the tide, while his frantic hands are trying to compact the soggy sand and keep the towers from falling.

I loved the imagery here. I can see vividly how Cloud's world is falling apart around him. Absolutely love this line/verse.

And then there was light. The door opened. And he was warmer than before, and it was Zack. Zack was next to him. Zack wiped at his face. Zack. That was okay. Zack was okay. Yeah.

Loved this one too. Zack is DEFINITELY "okay"...more than "okay" if you ask me :P

Can't wait for the next chapter and I have so much love for you right now. Adding to memories so others can read it too.

[beruthiels_cats]

Chilling, intense, incredible story! Please update?