Silence

Jun 17, 2012 15:19

I've actually been listening to Tablo's "Bad" on repeat for so long now, that that's the only thing that causes complete absence of sound. It's rather odd in that way.
I had to write this - I was going crazy not writing this.


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k_pop4life June 17 2012, 13:53:35 UTC
I think it's pretty?! I don't know how to describe how I feel about it with a proper word but I loved it. Especially the last part although I can't help but wonder what jonghyun or kibum would think about when they are making love, it would certainly be something poetic and romantic and fluffy and oh god I love fluffy jongkey to death.
Anyways I would've loved for more details but it's nice as it is now. It was amazing :)

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crazy4moony August 16 2012, 11:08:41 UTC
I'm not very sure, but I think, when they make love, it all just very silent noises. Like when their skin brushes together and it's a soft sound like the wheels of a bicycle running over pavement.
It would all be very mundane sounds, like most of them are, but combined together I think it would sound like something very exhilarating - like laughing so hard you're actually crying.

I understand what you mean with the more details... but sometimes I get the feeling like anything more would be overwhelming in a none-too-positive manner. If that makes sense...

Anyway, thank you ! ^-^

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just2wings June 17 2012, 13:59:59 UTC
This was definitely pretty ^^ I loved all the imagery you had going on -- it was so unique and yet so fitting. I really liked this, how both their characters are a bit subdued and how they both just fit together <3

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crazy4moony August 16 2012, 11:09:16 UTC
Thank you very much ^-^ I wanted them to fit so badly... aish.

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honestfrank June 18 2012, 00:26:14 UTC
I think you should write them, even if only for yourself. I know how it feels to have words trapped in your head and aching to get out--the only way they stop festering is to write them down. And if it's no good you can throw it away and pretend you never did anything beyond this.

Speaking of this, it's really beautiful. I specifically liked the fact that it's a tape, which to me is far preferable to a cd or record or mp3 or anything like that. Tapes are charming and you have to flip them over and there's just something nice about them.

If you eventually posted more I'd definitely read it, whether you felt it lived up to this one or not~

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crazy4moony August 16 2012, 11:12:32 UTC
I liked your suggestion of writing it out... in honesty, all I have are loose bits of paragraphs... to combine it as a nice sequel would take a lot of puzzling on my behalf, which I frankly don't have the strength for - at least I got rid of the words. Thank you for that.

I prefer tapes myself as well... they feel more realistic and tangible, is that silly ? I'm pretty sure I'd die without my mp3 but tapes... they take music to a different level.

Anyway, thank you very much for your review ^-^ it was very insightful and helped me a lot, so thank you for that !

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29. Love that sings goodbye, drunk, silence and nothing's gonna change my world livejournal June 23 2012, 23:22:19 UTC
User bru_shinodalp referenced to your post from 29. Love that sings goodbye, drunk, silence and nothing's gonna change my world saying: [...] when you’re part of a famous, blossoming idol group but for now… ------ 106. Silence [...]

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Re: 29. Love that sings goodbye, drunk, silence and nothing's gonna change my world crazy4moony August 16 2012, 11:13:37 UTC
I have no idea what this is and when I click on it I'm denied access and I'm really new so I don't know and it's rather disturbing, but... okay.

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