I've actually been listening to Tablo's "Bad" on repeat for so long now, that that's the only thing that causes complete absence of sound. It's rather odd in that way. I had to write this - I was going crazy not writing this.
I think it's pretty?! I don't know how to describe how I feel about it with a proper word but I loved it. Especially the last part although I can't help but wonder what jonghyun or kibum would think about when they are making love, it would certainly be something poetic and romantic and fluffy and oh god I love fluffy jongkey to death. Anyways I would've loved for more details but it's nice as it is now. It was amazing :)
I'm not very sure, but I think, when they make love, it all just very silent noises. Like when their skin brushes together and it's a soft sound like the wheels of a bicycle running over pavement. It would all be very mundane sounds, like most of them are, but combined together I think it would sound like something very exhilarating - like laughing so hard you're actually crying.
I understand what you mean with the more details... but sometimes I get the feeling like anything more would be overwhelming in a none-too-positive manner. If that makes sense...
This was definitely pretty ^^ I loved all the imagery you had going on -- it was so unique and yet so fitting. I really liked this, how both their characters are a bit subdued and how they both just fit together <3
I think you should write them, even if only for yourself. I know how it feels to have words trapped in your head and aching to get out--the only way they stop festering is to write them down. And if it's no good you can throw it away and pretend you never did anything beyond this.
Speaking of this, it's really beautiful. I specifically liked the fact that it's a tape, which to me is far preferable to a cd or record or mp3 or anything like that. Tapes are charming and you have to flip them over and there's just something nice about them.
If you eventually posted more I'd definitely read it, whether you felt it lived up to this one or not~
I liked your suggestion of writing it out... in honesty, all I have are loose bits of paragraphs... to combine it as a nice sequel would take a lot of puzzling on my behalf, which I frankly don't have the strength for - at least I got rid of the words. Thank you for that.
I prefer tapes myself as well... they feel more realistic and tangible, is that silly ? I'm pretty sure I'd die without my mp3 but tapes... they take music to a different level.
Anyway, thank you very much for your review ^-^ it was very insightful and helped me a lot, so thank you for that !
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Anyways I would've loved for more details but it's nice as it is now. It was amazing :)
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It would all be very mundane sounds, like most of them are, but combined together I think it would sound like something very exhilarating - like laughing so hard you're actually crying.
I understand what you mean with the more details... but sometimes I get the feeling like anything more would be overwhelming in a none-too-positive manner. If that makes sense...
Anyway, thank you ! ^-^
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Speaking of this, it's really beautiful. I specifically liked the fact that it's a tape, which to me is far preferable to a cd or record or mp3 or anything like that. Tapes are charming and you have to flip them over and there's just something nice about them.
If you eventually posted more I'd definitely read it, whether you felt it lived up to this one or not~
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I prefer tapes myself as well... they feel more realistic and tangible, is that silly ? I'm pretty sure I'd die without my mp3 but tapes... they take music to a different level.
Anyway, thank you very much for your review ^-^ it was very insightful and helped me a lot, so thank you for that !
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