Untitled Chapter 5/?

[crashtwig]

Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Chracters aren't mine...
A/N: I deeply apologize for it taking so long to get an update up.  This chapter was not kind enough to practically write itself like the first four did, so it took me longer, much longer than I had ever dreamed actually.  Anyways, sorry for the delay, but I hope you enjoy!

Comments

[pure_ecstasy6]

this was good, i liked it alot, i can't wait to read more! :)

[pure_ecstasy6]

g'day :) hows chapter 6 coming along? hehe

[crashtwig]

Slowly but surely. It started flowing pretty good, but about half way through I hit a freakin' wall again.

[cheyenne_maria]

WOW, can't wait for the next chapter ;)

Review

[phantomsqueaky]

Wow, nice chapter. That is some cliff hanger. I no likely, I want to know what is happening. For one thing I agree with Miranda, Andy aint telling the whole truth. What is she hidding? Why is she so sick? What was this family emergency? What happens next?

[mirandy6]

wow this is bloody brillant.
i want to know what happens next.
i can be so impatient when it comes to cliffhangers ROFL
i wonder why Andy isn't telling the truth to Miranda.
What is she hiding from her?
What is her sickness???
i don't reckon she had a family emergency... i reckon she went away for treatment for her sickness but told Miranda that it was a family "emergency" when really it was like a emergency treatment for herself. mhmm i reckon i could be correct! ROFL
we better find out whats wrong in the next part---i can't wait forever!! talking about the next part, when will you be uploading?! and will the chapter be longer then this part???

[crashtwig]

idk when the next part will be up. I had about half of it finished and then my computer crashed!, so I'm having to start from scratch on another one. I'm trying; haven't forgotten I swear