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Poison, Fire, Death [1/3]

Jul 26, 2009 03:00

Title: Poison, Fire, Death
Pairing: broken!Minsu, Yoosu
Genre: Angst, drama
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): Mention of rape
Summary: Sometimes, poison isn't the one doing all the killings.
A/N: A rather short threeshot. Something I wrote for
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fanfiction, pairing: minsu, genre: drama, genre: romance, length: threeshot, genre: angst, pairing: yoosu, rating: pg-13

Comments 10

sleeplesshadow July 31 2009, 12:59:20 UTC

Why didn't I see this? I'm getting old.

*cries*

sleeplesshadow July 31 2009, 17:40:33 UTC

Kim Junsu was Shim Changmin’s poison. With fluid-like movements, a perfect, curvy body, and a pure, untainted, lively spirit with the best looking grin ever, he was his desire, his heart, his soul - and his ultimate downfall.

Changmin could imagine a smiling, cheeky Junsu before his eyes, with a label of a skull stuck to his chest, Poison: Do not consume internally. Once spread, it will not stop.

Is it fine to say human always have the desire to touch something that is dangerous? I think I'm poisoned as well.

Wait. RAPE???

Are you trying to make me feel sorry for Changmin? But, Yoosu is my OTP, how can I not root for Yoosu? What are you trying to do here? XD XD

Update! <3 ya~

crashingtragedy July 31 2009, 18:31:00 UTC

It's okay, my lovely godmother. What matters is you still read this and *facepalms* I feel so mortified yet happy at the same time because this was written in the wee hours of the morning where I was barely conscious D:

WE ARE ALL POISONED. By the alluring DBSK poison. D:

Oh yeah, rape. Ok I feel evil. But not explicit rape of course. I'm not skilled enough to write explicit rape without having half the Yoosu fans come after me

Yes I am trying to make you feel sorry for Changmin. XD Because what he's going to do later is .......... sad. D: I'm trying to make you confused. Haha joking, joking. I've already finished this. Will post part II up after I've done the final editings :D

sleeplesshadow July 31 2009, 18:35:55 UTC

You're updating? *wiggles eyebrows* I'm lucky to see this today, right?

You're really good, to be able to write when you were barely conscious. XD XD I'm getting old... I can't even stay up late now. I'm planning not to sleep tonight because I have school work to rush and I don't want to leave it to tomorrow.

I'll be waiting!^^ I can't wait... since what you told me sounds so interesting!

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awshin October 31 2009, 15:31:50 UTC

Poor Changmin but I still stick to Yoosu. Lol!