My Devil's Ride (Chapter Four)

Jun 05, 2009 21:52

Title: My Devil's Ride
Pairing: Yoosu, Jaesu, Yunjae, Minsu
Rating: PG - R
Genre: Romance, angst, fantasy
Length: Chaptered
Summary: Kim Junsu meets the devil of the town. Well ... literally.

Chapter Four )

fanfiction, park yoochun, genre: romance, length: chaptered, fic: my devil's ride, rating: pg, genre: angst, rating: pg-13, pairing: yoosu, kim junsu, genre: fantasy

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ingenu3 June 4 2009, 22:04:35 UTC
BOOOYAAAAA =(
U CANT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT T_T

i hope jaesu is one sided though..

devil carrying a pink dolphin mug? CUTENESS.
chun chun~

i need to know their past.
there's something there isnt it?

update soon babe~

*winks

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crashingtragedy June 8 2009, 06:04:24 UTC
BOOOYAAAAAAA :D

Jaesu ... omg. Why is everyone fretting over Jaesu? Haha. don't worry dear. :D

There is something going on with their past. :D Smart!

*winks*

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misstellittome June 5 2009, 02:03:16 UTC
dah!

i love the little jaesu... ^^

but yoochun... what an appetite you have O_o

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crashingtragedy June 8 2009, 06:05:03 UTC
Laaalaalaa :D

Yay. I think you're the second one who likes the little Jaesu here. XD

Yoochun is a possessive devil. :D

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aiko103 June 5 2009, 02:31:07 UTC
bfiuiuinvkjbhuh!!!!
Cliffhanger!!!!
me no likey cliffhangy *pouts*
LOL!!!!
Gosh!!! You broke my JaeSu heart again!!! TT-TT
Wae?!
So.. Su can't remember that he used to have relation with Chun.. did I get that right?
Geezz.. me want more~ *flails*

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crashingtragedy June 8 2009, 06:05:51 UTC
Nooooooooooooo. *picks up shattered pieces of heart and glues them back together*

Yes, you got that right. Reason being ... well you'll find out soon. :D

Thanks dear!

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sleeplesshadow June 5 2009, 02:51:27 UTC
You're right, I am going to be a zombie soon. I just stay up late for 2 hours last night and now I'm sore as hell. :( I'm trying to do something for Yoochunnie's birthday. >< I'm a utter failure.

This chapter combine with sweetness, eeriness & sadness all together. My feelings is all twisted. XD Maybe it's just I'm tired. XP Yoochun sent those dreams? But why hadn't he make Junsu come to him before. It was kind of Jaejoong who brought Junsu to him.

two, large, black feathery wings Aww... I love wings.^^ Something must have been wrong with me. With blooksucking and all, my attention is all on the wings. :D Junsu screams. Su, what do you expect? Yoochun spreading his wings for fashion show. XD XD XD I'm just kidding.

I sounded so weird today. >< I'm so sorry. Blame it on my lack of sleep. Smart to be aware of my weapons. XD XD Machine gun is always my favorite. Do learn some the matrix moves before you try to offend me. XD XD XD jk jk~

Ah!!! I'm a psycho writer.^^ *runaway*

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crashingtragedy June 8 2009, 06:09:53 UTC
You felt those emotions accurately. It is true that this chapter is a combination of sweetness, eeriness and sadness :D I LOVE YOU! :D Hmmm. Good one. I didn't really think about that problem. I would probably explain it as Yoochun's choice, on his part. He wanted Junsu to come to him willingly, as an equal being, rather than his sacrifice. And perhaps partly because he didn't know Jaejoong & Junsu's relation beforehand? Aarghhhh, it is hard explaining. But that was a really really good question. :D

Hehe the wings are quite the hottest part of a devil's body XD Omg. You have a machine gun?! Omg. I better wear a bulletproof vest at all times :D *runs*

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padmik June 5 2009, 03:03:45 UTC
ooh my goodness, Yoochun has something up his sleeve!!!! I'm kind of worried for the Su now (though you'd think I be when he first went into the manor).

Oh gosh, Yoochun + black wings = ♥

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crashingtragedy June 8 2009, 06:14:20 UTC
Haha :D Excitement excitement for the Yoosu!

Thanks for reading this chapter. Your presence gives me comfort. :D

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