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cranperryjuice

This Time Around (3/3)

Feb 25, 2010 16:10

Title: This Time Around (3/3)
Pairing: Teddy/Taeyang
Rating: R
Word Count: 28,889
A/N: Despite the three parts, this is a very long one-shot meant to be read in one sitting (if you have the stamina, heh). I divided it only because of LJ.

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!one-shot, pairing: taeyang/teddy, artist: 1tym, !m/m, artist: big bang

Comments 43

integrawh February 25 2010, 21:28:35 UTC

SPOT for meh! because i seriously visited your LJ about 20 times today waiting for this. <3

integrawh February 25 2010, 23:17:42 UTC

OMFGD!!! I seriously was waiting for this more than my bday ;DDDDD

It's SO good! I can't really find words to tell u how much I liked it.

And it's not because of this pairing and that i'm deeply in love with Teddy. It's because it was so realistic, so natural. And because u showed a part of their lives after the show is over - they're ordinary people too, with smeared make up and mornin breath. AND because u wrote about 1TYM issue that I cant stop thinking about these days, it's making me crazy (1TYM, guys, come back?)AND because Teddy is a lazy bum, Kush is being his funny self and Bae is just tidy, shy and adorable. AND because there's none of that dramatic angst and tears, cheats and break ups. It's just amazingly perfect.

And now...if u don't mind i would like to threaten u to write another fic of this pairing. U know, sometime in the future? Cause I have this one to be hyper and happy about for about a month (thats how great it is).

I think i wrote my longest fic comment ever ;D I LOVE YOU for writing this. <3 <3 <3 ( ... )

cranperryjuice February 27 2010, 16:23:40 UTC

Thanks! I'd say Teddy is unmotivated rather than lazy, but the rest sounds about right. ;)
I just might write more - I like this pairing a lot.

integrawh February 28 2011, 22:10:13 UTC

1 year later :) i just read this 5th...6th time? :) it's amazing. I wish you would still write Taeyang/Teddy. I still stalk your LJ ;DDDD

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coffeebang February 25 2010, 22:54:39 UTC

Great ending :]

cranperryjuice February 27 2010, 16:23:49 UTC

Thank you. :3

prettyminstrel February 25 2010, 23:44:06 UTC

oh you have no idea how freakin long night it has been for me, refreshing my friends page over & over again, alternating between reading heartbreaking kpop news and reading your fic, and then re-reading ALL three parts of your fics again..yr fic update came just at the right time as a distraction for me to nurse my poor, fragile heart;_;
thank you for updating regularly and thank you for writing this..it's awesome as always

cranperryjuice February 27 2010, 16:24:49 UTC

Aw. Jaebeom, right? Sorry about the bad news. D: I'm glad I'm in a fairly drama-free fandom.
Anyway, thanks for reading!

whetstone February 26 2010, 04:21:12 UTC

omg the end yessss.

okay so i really loved the scene with teddy trying to dance with the yg kids and getting all tired, but still being a pretty good sport. also his budding friendship with seungho and how slowly he was integrated into their whole social circle and teddy getting stuff for yb at the convenience store and just, idk. i thought all of it was awesome sighs :3 i'm sad it's over, but it ended at just the right spot so i can't really complain!

cranperryjuice February 27 2010, 16:28:00 UTC

Thank you! :D
The parts you pointed out are some of my favorites as well, heh. I need to write more Seungho fic.

blackstarnebula February 26 2010, 05:54:33 UTC

I have been stalking your LJ all day waiting for this and boy did you deliver. OMG!!! I am totally spazzing out over this and I can't tell you how perfect this was. I love your Teddy and your YoungBae and afafl fasl nkfsn lkanfl n .... sorry that was just me spazzing out again. lol. This fic is love. I have officially fallen in love.

cranperryjuice February 27 2010, 16:28:12 UTC

Hahah, thanks! :D