Dance! (1/1)

[cranberry_pi]

Title: Dance! (1/1)

Author: cranberry_pi

Summary: Just a night in New York

Pairings: Pieberry

Length: ~1,800

Rating: NC-17 for sort of explicit sexytimes

A/N: I wasn't actually going to post this.  I don't think it's all that great, and I was a little hesitant.  But you know what?  I'm feeling good, health-wise, for the first time in ages, and I

Comments

[vsquared_k]

OMFG NOW I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO PLAY DDR WITHOUT THINKING OF SEX

also, me gusta :) I love how Rachel and Brittany reunite in New York, and I like how both of them, despite not exactly reaching their dreams, still found happiness.

And I like how Brittany wants to play with Rachel :D

[cranberry_pi]

Aww, I'm sorry I ruined DDR for you, bb! :D

Thank you! :) I'm really glad you liked it - that was the most nervous I've ever been before I clicked "Post," honestly, so it means a lot. :) *hugs*

[nyx29]

That was really sweet and very hot! :)

You had no reason to feel nervous, you had a really great balance going on... :)
Brittany's naivety and sweet innocence whilst still being effortlessly sexual, Rachel being completely incapable of watching her dance and not wanting to jump her (who wouldn't btw?) and the optimistic realism of not having everything you ever wanted, but being happy and content with what you have. In fact, the more I think about it, it was pretty damn near perfect. :)

I'm really glad you were up to writing again and that something gave you the confidence to hit that post button. It was worth it. :) I'm definitely glad I checked this out before I went to bed! I can go to sleep with nice images in my mind now. ;)

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[cranberry_pi]

Aww - I don't even know what to say, except thank you! :) I'm just really glad it worked, and that I could fill your head with good mental images before bed. ;)

[mjacton]

I'm pretty committed to Faberry (with the occasional Pezberry), but since you hadn't posted anything in such a long time, I knew I had to read this.

And, I was not disappointed. You really made me enjoy this pairing.

Good job.

[cranberry_pi]

Thank you so much! :) I appreciate your dropping by even if it's not a favored pairing of yours, and I appreciate all the kind words. :) Hopefully it won't be so long before the next one. :)