Fic: The Long Drive (1/1)

[cranberry_pi]

Title: The Long Drive
Author: cranberry_pi
Rating: NC-17 for sex of one sort or another
Spoilers: Definitely not.
Summary: It was a much longer drive then they'd planned.  Sequel to The Long Walk.  You demanded it, I delivered! :D 
A/N:   Credit to elocineel for the title, and to jacs1010 for the circumstances!

Comments

[sianislove]

Absolutely amazing! There's gonna be a sequel right? *hint hint*

[cranberry_pi]

There might be! I'm trying to decide what I want to write now that I'm getting ack into it, so we'll see! :)

[jacs1010]

UNF!

Gah speechless!

So much more hotter then I could've ever imagined!

Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou for writing this!

Loved the flirty cop & oh my all those orgasms :)

Loved that last line brilliant!

Right now on knees bowing to you :)

[cranberry_pi]

You're so welcome! :) Thank you for the inspiration, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[nyx29]

I'm not sure if this was hotter than The Long Walk because it was a continuation of it or if it was because it's from Rachel's POV, but I loved it!

I think it is the power of Rachel's desperation and need that you portray that makes it so brilliant in my opinion.

Words pretty much still fail me because of the unf factor but I'm sure I'll have more to say about it when the power of speech has returned! :)

x

[cranberry_pi]

Coming from one of my favoritest smutty writers, that means a lot! :) I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[mjacton]

Ah, yes. Sweet revenge.

This was hilarious! And, kind of hot! Sweet torture I guess.

[cranberry_pi]

Yes, there's definitely revenge in the near future, lol.

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! :)

[sole_knightley]

omg the office, I died laughing. Poor Rachel... but it was hot. lol

[cranberry_pi]

Sorry to make you laugh in the office! :) Thank you so much for commenting, and I'm sorry it took me so long to answer! :)