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[hakuen]

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[mimei]

the thing is he wrote all that to be well within Die's --
confusing syntax!

coded in their mitochondria. ♥

Fingers move, ( comma after the closed parentheses unless there's a reason it's before?

offers for which utterly swamp demand syntax? what syntax?

Kyo's affair with the muse of pitch is ever slippery, ♥

syntaaaaax. and the voice seems a bit inconsistent. and i am sorry for the suck of this comment. i think my brain is lost.

[sugarless_666]

the thing is he wrote all that to be well within Die's --
confusing syntax!

I didn't find it confusing, for some reason.

he still claims he's flying by the seat of his miniskirt and lobbies to be fired in favor of someone more worthy

This one took me a while to figure out, though.

But, you know. Personally, I don't care much about syntax if the impression I get is interesting.

the decision was made and there's no going back even if it means he must compensate (beautifully, with no word said)

♥

I liked this, it was thought provoking and interesting in its structure. ♥

[sugarless_666]

And what is it with me and html today? =/

[hakuen]

eh *kisses your cheek* I appreciate it more than I can say regardless of you and html's feud xD - more to be said more properly later, I'm going to sleep for a little bit~ thank you *kisses*