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[coyotescribbles]

new : fanfic : super junior
rating : PG-13
focus: K.R.Y-centric (featuring some yehsung x ryeowook)
4,475 words. AU.

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[hoyah]

8D SINCE IT IS FOR ME I AM CLAIMING FIRST!

and with the lj edit feature, i can come back here without putting up a bonus comment to you that ruins the thread-like-ness.

-edited with my random comments-

yeh the scavenger. 8D *so amused*

His hand was soft, like a desk-clerk's or a woman's, and he stared at Yehsung in apparent puzzlement for a few moments before giving himself a little shake. "Oh--oh, sorry, it's Kim--just Ryeowook, really. That's my name--thank you, your help would be ever-so-much appreciated--and you are...?"

>> i like how woman is the after thought. and then ryeo promptly proves yeh right on that point! 8D with his speech.

the kid had cheekbones some women would kill for, and an incongruously pretty little rosebud mouth.

aw! ^^ kekeke it's about time someone other than me mentioned his mouth!

8D god, how do you always fall into just the right style for whatever it is you're writing? *envyenvy*

two hands shorter than most of the horses around him.8D aw, like his master. too small but still intimidating

[jaded_skys]

I'm taking first because oh goodness, you actually wrote it!

Adhsajfhdsjhfks~!! Proper comment when I'm back from school!

[jaded_skys]

No more first! ;___;

But good god, you are so amazing at really getting into whatever genre you write and do it so perfectly! There's really too too much I adored about this, I can't even get into it and I think hoyah said everything I possibly could.

"They used to call him Kimmy Chubs,"

*dies*

[vivid_sky]

ryeowook's ass is a fine piece of meat?
ROFL!!!xD<3

Great story! I highly enjoyed it!
Kimmy Chubs! LOL!

[ryeowookie]

i`ll go with the whole ass meat thing.

8DDb

lsjlvksjkdkflsd lolololol kimmy chubs XD -shot-

OK. that was really good. reallyreallygood. I like how Yeh doesn`t even stop and go `wait, you played me?` but instead goes `HAY BAYBAY C`MERE ;DD`

lsjlfjlsvsld ♥ teehee

"It ain't the only thing aching..."

[hyperballad]

There was no accounting for his partner's taste, at times, although the pretty, pouting redhead a few stops back had been a step up from the norm. Eyes to get lost in, even if she didn't have much of a chest. Too bad she'd been too busy with Yehsung for him to be able to spend any time getting to know her one-on-one.

...wait a minute! 8D

Kimmy Chubs...just...yeah. 8D