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Fic: Close Your Eyes, 2/?

Jun 19, 2007 02:15

Series: Close Your Eyes (in progress)
Chapter: Insomnia (part II) (part I)Author: Oparu ( Read more... )

john/elizabeth, ust, fic, oparu

Comments 17

moominlady June 19 2007, 08:46:16 UTC

*blinks*

Ok, I'm gonna have to come back in about an hour and review this properly, because right now I'm just goo.

moominlady June 19 2007, 10:10:04 UTC

ok, I'm ready now. :P

I absolutely love that first scene. The intimacy of letting her into his mind and her struggling to control it was fantastic. It had great visual. In fact, this whole chapter was fantastic. The whole mixing of minds was facinating and I loved it.

As she panted to catch her breath, Elizabeth realized the beast was hers.

That has to be the best line in this whole fic so far. ;)

oparu June 19 2007, 17:19:58 UTC

Thanks! It's twisted and kinky and weird to write but I loved and I'm thrilled you do.

oparu June 19 2007, 17:33:51 UTC

Thanks! Don't feel like I can really take credit because I reread "Genesis" and sort-of lifted/was inspired by Mine. It just seemed to fit. ;)

uniquinum June 19 2007, 09:31:42 UTC

When we were discussing this the other day I had no idea it would be so hot...

You will be doing more won't you?

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Re: Iz all still beta'ing... oparu June 19 2007, 17:24:05 UTC

Fixed. Thanks much! I'll try not to leave the pretty editing marks in next time... ;)

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oparu June 19 2007, 17:36:54 UTC

Writing a real threesome just seems like a logistical nightmare. I'd need props to remember what was going on. But I like. This AU is so different it strains my fic-writing muscles in entirely new ways.

It's almost more fun than the real world. So thank you. (again...and again)

ankareeda June 19 2007, 18:23:25 UTC

Is all confused in a good way, WOW this was different, but awesome. Great writing!!!

oparu June 22 2007, 05:16:04 UTC

hehe! yay smut! and thanks ;)