Fic: Snow Day

Feb 21, 2015 22:50

Fic: Snow Day
Fandom: Sherlock
Summary: Sherlock has a cold, and John and Sherlock have a fight.

Time for a snow day ficlet! I tried writing it last time I had a snow day, and didn't get to finish. Lucky me, I ended up getting another snow day four days later. Be gentle, this is my very first Sherlock fic.

Fic here. )

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trepkos February 22 2015, 09:38:12 UTC
Very nicely done - you've got the character's voices very well! Typical stubborn Sherlock.

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cowboyguy February 22 2015, 22:32:53 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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tarotgal March 1 2015, 03:13:44 UTC
I'm a week late with feedback--sorry, sweetie!

I loved John being frustrated with him (i.e. "You're not allergic to cats!" LOL) I loved John becoming more curious and pushy as the fic went on. John in doctor mode around Sherlock is one of my favorite things ever. It's like having built-in hurt/comfort.

And I loved Sherlock so sick and feverish that he'd actually stand there with the window open, thinking in his muddled mind that it was a brilliant idea. Also, of course, I'm a fan of anything involving microplush blankets. Adorable, confused!Sherlock Mycroft plush? heehehee

But what I loved the most were the little British in character moments/lines. Like “Lovely talking to you, Sherlock!” and “…Think I already have done.” And soooooooooo many of John's lines were SO JOHN. His "Right" and every exasperated exclamation and command--I could hear it all in Martin's voice so clearly. You got him down PERFECTLY!

I can't wait to read more Sherlockfic from you in the future!

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