Fic: Help Me If You Can (I'm Feeling Down)

Apr 20, 2014 22:09

(One of these days, I'll write a fic where Sam's not sick. But not today.)

Title: Help Me If You Can (I’m Feeling Down)
Summary: “The first time Sam sneezes, it ends in a panic attack.” - This is the first time Sam gets sick, not long after he’s gotten out of Hell.

Verse: Frayed ‘verse fic. This is the third one I’ve written, after Nothing to Read more... )

fic, supernatural, fic: help me if you can, frayed 'verse

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sexualoddity April 21 2014, 08:52:36 UTC
Oh wow this is wonderful! I love how absolutely tender this Verse is, and how looking after Sam has completely changed, but I don't know, maybe the principles are still the same. I LOVE the trivia thing and Sam haven't to work hard to remember/process everything, and man, it's lovely that Dean is all sick too, and just needing to rest, but he'll step up to whatever Sam needs of him. The end especially, was beautiful.

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cowboyguy April 21 2014, 23:48:38 UTC
Yay! Thank you! <3

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steeplechasers April 21 2014, 15:02:16 UTC
i've just found this 'verse and i love it so much. dean taking care of sam is one of my biggest weaknesses and his tenderness here is just beautiful.

the trivia thing is SUCH a cool idea and i love what you do with it. <3

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cowboyguy April 21 2014, 16:35:49 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying it.

It's so much fun figuring out how they cope, so I'm glad the trivia idea works for you. Poor Sam is so broken.

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nonmouser April 21 2014, 23:23:10 UTC
just read this and loved it, and then had to read "nothing to kill or die for" as well! Can I ask what happened to "no scratching" though? Is it friends only? I'd love to read that one as well if there's any way I can get to it!

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cowboyguy April 21 2014, 23:41:22 UTC
Yeah, that would be because I forgot to change it to a public post before I posted it. :D Oops. It should be better now.

Glad you liked the fic!

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nonmouser April 21 2014, 23:50:57 UTC
Yeah, it's there now, thanks so much! c:

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cowboyguy April 22 2014, 14:04:06 UTC
Thanks!

Yeah, I have the feeling Dean doesn't ever think it's good enough... but he tries. :)

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senberet April 22 2014, 18:12:10 UTC
“C’mon, you gotta eat something.” Dean’s voice is softer now, coaxing. “How about… uhhh… sneeze- huh’ngk! - what about some pasta?” he suggests after stifling the sneeze into his shoulder.

I thought about that during my commute yesterday, thought about it at work, in class, at home... seriously, all day long.

I really liked this!! Dean will go to such lengths for Sam, and I love the idea of them taking a day to try to relax, both sick, kind of resting a little even though there's so much going on with Sam that they'll never reeeaally be able to relax, but it's nothing that they can't really handle. Nice happy ending too!!

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cowboyguy April 23 2014, 13:29:42 UTC
Aww, that's awesome!

I'm really having fun exploring this relationship. Of course, Dean has always done anything for Sam, but now it's different, because he has to try to anticipate and respond to so many of Sam's reactions. I'm having fun getting to know gentle Dean. :)

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