This Sweet Madness; Intermission

[covenmouse]

Posting this here for archival purposes because V wanted it...

Title:  This Sweet Madness
Genre(s):  Angst/Dark, friendship, action/adventure
Length:  1153w
Summary:  Besot by demons of the past, the reincarnated Shitennou find themselves torn between the memories of what was, and their new realities. They gravitate toward one another in an effort to

Comments

[venusorbit1]

OK I know I gushed and yelled at you to write more of this already, so I'll skip that and instead focus on the shit I <3: mainly, that you set up the atmosphere of the scene so well, simply by describing how Rei ate her cake. Right there the reader can tell that they are trying to celebrate but are really messed up about everything, too. The cats are just the right amount of tactless so that you understand where they are coming from.

And then you cliffhanger me. Thanks, man, I thought we were friends ;__;

[covenmouse]

but but.. I LIKE cliffhangers ;3;

and I love the kitties for their tactless. XD They're both so "THIS IS SRS BIZNESS"... well, more Luna than Arty, but still. It's fun to write.

[ellorgast]

Ohhh wow. Going to echo V: the way you set up the scene is brilliant, and says so much. I'm absolutely fascinated by their process of figuring things out, and I really want to know how much Mamoru has worked out on his own ahead of everyone. I had a feeling he was already catching on with Zoe, and then the way he looked at Jun at the end.

Did they figure it out from what Jun was shouting at Bachiko? What do they mean about him not waking up? Did something else happen? Agh, I have to know!

Still brilliant! Please give us more!

[ellorgast]

Ooh! If Usagi is 32, that still means they could have been reborn right after season 1, yes?

[covenmouse]

That's pretty much the idea, though I don't think it's right after. It's been about eighteen years since S1, and ... y'know I'm not sure if it's come up yet, lol. Both Jun and Zoe are sixteen, I think Bachiko is too. She might be a few months older, but she's in the same area. I'll go ahead and spill that Keanu is seventeen.

Keanu is up next, then Nick and probably Mina before we get around to what happened to Jun ;D

But I think you're right about Mamoru working some stuff out before the others--but he also is very confused about something.

[ellorgast]

Yeah, I think you mentioned their age somewhere, but I couldn't remember it precisely.

Agh, I have to wait so long for Jun, but I'm excited for the other guys!

Could he possibly be confused about Zoe's gender? XD

MMMMFGGGGG

[venusorbit1]

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE THIS BEFORE I GO BONKERS. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.

Nothing constructive here! Just whining at you to give me MOAR in the hopes that it might happen!