New Gotham Slayer chapter

[cousinmary]

I posted a new chapter to Gotham Slayer and it's a bit of a mixed bag.  There's a conversation between Danny and Buffy I'm pretty proud of, but the end of the chapter is mostly prep work to get things set up for later.

Unfortunately, it's the way of reviewers to comment on the very last bits of a chapter and ignore earlier portions.  :-/  It's not

Comments

[aviva___]

Hey!

Just wanted to stop by and say I'm loving this story! Your writing is fantastic and really draws you into the characters! Some feedback on your OC (as requested) I think it's a fantastic idea, and you've made the character really appealing. I like a lot how you've given a lot of potential for how it can swing (he's one of the good guys, with andrew, but Buffy is really going out on a limb trusting someone whose job it is to discover secrets and expose them!). Anyways, great job, and I can't wait to read more!

[cousinmary]

Thanks! I always worry that fanfic is ruining my ability to write orginal characters and that they won't come across as fully developed or people won't be able to imagine them in the scenes. Thanks for commenting :)

[aviva___]

no problem! I can completely see him as a character. Haha, it's almost reverse movie syndrome, like, I have a picture of him in my mind, and seeing an actor wouldn't ever be the same. Anyways, great job, love the story!