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Pretending (1/?)

Jun 13, 2011 01:00

Title: Pretending
Pairing(s): Eventual Faberry, brief Fabrevans, Finchel friendship, some Brittana
Length: 1,855
Rating: PG-13 for now
Spoilers: All of both seasons, just to be safe
Summary: Quinn loves Rachel, Rachel loves Quinn. But neither of them want to confess their feelings. Will they ever have a happy ending? A Faberry twist on the song " ( Read more... )

rachel/quinn, new fic!, glee, faberry

Comments 5

mjacton June 13 2011, 16:18:00 UTC

Eyes, Rachel. Look at her eyes! Not her lips.--Well, at least she can pretend to stay focused when she's looking at her eyes.

Oh my dradle. Quinn Fabray just asked me to come over to her house. What is air?--So, they're not best friends like the first paragraph of the Prologue implied?

I close my mouth, feeling a little aroused by her demanding tone. I mean, what?--Is Rachel really surprised that she's aroused by this?

These are just details. I really like the fic overall.

court_1014 June 13 2011, 17:38:39 UTC

Thanks :)

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court_1014 June 13 2011, 21:21:02 UTC

Thanks :)

ayden07 June 13 2011, 23:59:30 UTC

Quinn better be careful or one day, her inner monologue is gonna fail and she is going to say what she feels out loud! hahaha poor Quinn, i would be so confused with myself. What I find refreshing about this story is that you have Finn trying to help Rachel. I really dislike Finn on the show because I hate the way he is written. and I hate the way they write Rachel when she is with Finn. Clearly Im not a Finchel fan. But i love your Finn and his efforts to get Faberry together. Poor Sam, hes dubious. Great chapter! =)

court_1014 June 14 2011, 03:32:29 UTC

Thank you :)