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countrygirl_914

Crumbling and Rebuilding (Glee, 1/1)

Feb 09, 2011 00:36

Summary: Rachel is perceptive, and Dave has nowhere to hide. A conversation after the Superbowl episode.
Rating: T
Warnings: Takes place sometime after the Superbowl episode.
A/N: So much love for the Superbowl episode. This idea grabbed me and wouldn't let go. I wrote this before the Valentine's Day episode, but I think it still works either ( Read more... )

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Because I don't have a CRYING icon!!! ibshafer February 9 2011, 06:17:32 UTC

This was so...[bwahahaha...]...god, whenever anyone is nice to Dave, I burst into tears...

This was just so lovely - short and sweet. And you addressed some of the things we'd be wondering about - in the days after the championship game.

Great job - the emotion is just right and I love that it's Rachel that goes to him. She's been one of the loudest against him, but you can see where she'd be perceptive enough to put two and two together - she'd know the things to look for. And her family situation gives her a very sensitive perspective on this.

Wonderful!

I won't beg for more, because I understand what it's like to conceive of something as a simple, self-contained piece, but if you decided to, it'd be lovely.

Re: Because I don't have a CRYING icon!!! countrygirl_914 February 9 2011, 06:29:49 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

demented_mei February 9 2011, 06:47:19 UTC

Thank you so much for writing this. I have such a hard time just hating Karofsky. No matter how many horrible things he's done, he's still just very confused and scared of who he is.

Beautifully done.

countrygirl_914 February 12 2011, 23:55:03 UTC

Thanks! After Never Been Kissed I loved Karofsky's character, because there was so much depth and possibility there. I hope they keep going with it.

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countrygirl_914 February 12 2011, 23:55:54 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. ♥

karlamartinova February 9 2011, 08:34:50 UTC

I loved this :) I still expecting something like this on the show, Dave really should talk to someone, and Rachel would be absolutely perfect, or Kurt.

countrygirl_914 February 12 2011, 23:56:28 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked it enough to comment. :D

wine_carnation February 9 2011, 10:32:21 UTC

Oh... you just made me cry.

This needs to happen on the show. Like, NOW. You've got Rachel down pat. She's the one character I can't write to save my life (well, there's also Sue, since I don't know enough about American culture/society/history to warp the facts like she does, but other insults are easy enough with her) and you wrote her extremely well.

I wanna go inside your story and join Rachel and start a group hug for Dave <3

countrygirl_914 February 12 2011, 23:58:13 UTC

I'm so glad you like my characterization! It always makes me happy when I've done that well. And I may be American, but I don't know if I could ever attempt to write Sue--that's just so beyond my abilities.

I wish I could give Dave so many hugs. <333