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Un Amore Per Sempre

Aug 25, 2008 21:56

Title: Un Amore Per Sempre
Author: Saphira112
Pairing: Implied Cassian/Jezebel, but possible White Owl/Cassian
Warnings: None, really
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Possible sequel to Seven of Swords. "You, Seven of Swords, will decide on how you yourself in this ever-perishing world will play your role in this arrangement, what notes you will allow yourself ( Read more... )

cassian, owl, fanfiction, jezebel

Comments 4

000_hester_000 August 26 2008, 22:33:22 UTC

I like it, but I can't help but wonder what your poor teacher though. Tsk tsk, innocent teachers should not be exposed to the insanity that is Count Cain. One thing, though. I do think that you get into spots where you use too many adjectives-- describing everyone's hair color, eye color, etc. But you writing fic for poor, neglected Owl is still 100% win, though.

saphira112 August 26 2008, 22:59:41 UTC

Bwahaha, there's just about nothing that can scar my writing teacher, who is already made of win. He's humorous and is open-minded. And compared to other people in the classroom, this is quite light XD But I still wonder about the poor guy, though...

Yeah, I need to learn to cut back on description and put it where it's needed. Learning how to do that now in English class, so that'll be good =3

Yay! I win!

Oh, and speaking of which, once my White Owl wig comes in the mail (hopefully within the next week; coming from Hong Kong), I'll post pictures and see what people think. Note that my sewing skills suck, so I'm using my friend for that. The only thing so far that is win is my coat...... which I found out is a Matrix coat..... xD

000_hester_000 August 27 2008, 12:58:51 UTC

Too many adjectives kill! But yeah, I used to do that too. Some of my stuff from a few years ago is full of very lulzy purple prose. My best advice now is to only put in descriptions that are important and/or contribute to the overall feeling of the story.

I do want to see your wig when it comes. Owl's hair is so very pretty, so if nothing else it should be fun to wear.

saphira112 August 27 2008, 23:12:46 UTC

Hee, sorry! Yes, mine is full of... things that shouldn't be there.

Yeah, about that... I'm afraid it won't come in time, cause we've gotten no confirmation e-mail and mum doesn't care enough to check, so I'm sort of at a loss. Tis been 9 and coming from Hon Kong... so the minimum of 7 days has passed, but if it's not here by Tuesday (if we don't get mail Monday), then something is definitely wrong...