Comments | count_cain: Interference Not Acceptable

saphira112 in count_cain

Interference Not Acceptable

Aug 01, 2008 16:35

A pale hand was pulling the bow, the tightly wrapped horsehair making the two of the strings emit higher pitches than they was supposed to. Fingers delicately turned the D peg and the E peg… and tried again. The bow drew across the strings now slowly, like a haunting mix of four base notes stringing together for the beginning of an unknown song. ( Read more... )

owl, fanfiction

Comments 4

evrything_burns August 2 2008, 00:43:50 UTC

Oooh, it gave me chills. I could almost hear the violin XD

Great fic ^^

veleda_k August 2 2008, 00:57:30 UTC

I like this a lot. A great take on a minor character. (I have minor character love.)

000_hester_000 August 2 2008, 15:32:34 UTC

I like the third-to-last line the best. Not just is it a beautiful description, but I also think that it suits Owl's character well. And just to prove that I guess my brain really is in the gutter after reading your other one, this line made me laugh:
his index finger on the G string
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I wonder whose G string it was....

saphira112 August 3 2008, 02:58:44 UTC

Sankies, Doctor!

And wwwwwoooowww... *shakes head sadly* You've been far too corrupted XD Suits ya well