Sarah Jane Adventures: PWP
Note: all characters having sex in these stories are either over 18 already, or have been aged up to 18.
Awkward by Radiantbaby
Written for a "Jenny/Luke first time" prompt on the kinkmeme, this story works surprisingly well, probably because Jenny and Luke are similar characters, with heads full of knowledge but little practical experience. I was slightly squicked by the idea of Luke having a wank every time he overheard the Doctor and Sarah Jane having sex, but personal issues aside, this is a good story, with an amusing (and very in-character) last line for Jenny.
...And Things That Go Bump in the Night by Aeshna
Luke overhears some unusual noises coming from his mother's bedroom and discovers Sarah Jane making good use of a riding crop on Jack Harkness. The dialogue is snappy and funny, and Luke is very much Luke here: fiercely protective of his mother, curious about what's going on, and utterly lacking in tact when it comes to asking questions.
Sarah Jane's Adventures With Pheromone Pollen by Kbox
I'm sure there are some people who like a lot of setup in their PWP, but I'm not one of them, and this story has 2,500+ words of exposition before you get anywhere near the porn. Once you do find the porn, it's preceded by an unlikely conversation between Alan and Sarah Jane in which he calls her a MILF (is that slang even in common use in England?), while Sarah Jane talks about hearing teenage boys whisper that about her behind her back. The acronym creeps me out enough as it is - do you really need a silly and vaguely offensive term to explain you find an older woman attractive? - but then Maria had a set of lines that really bothered me: "I'm not saying I want to see you all sex-mad again ... but ... even when I was mortified by how you were acting, a part of me totally idolized you for it. ... You're who I want to be when I grow up, and ... it's neat that you still have men and boys both, like, literally falling at your feet." Way to project your power fantasies on a 13-year-old girl, author.
R & R by Persiflage_1
This is straightforward Martha/Sarah Jane - the sex is perfectly adequate, but didn't really do much for me. I felt like I was reading about two random women having sex, not Martha and Sarah Jane, though possibly someone who had read the prequel to this and understood the reasons for the characters' attraction would enjoy this more. Style=mine is suggested for those readers who, like me, have problems viewing yellow type on a sky-blue background.
Intergalactic Anytime Minutes by Ellisbelle
Dirty talk: not my kink. "Come for me": a sentence virtually guaranteed to have me clicking the Back button. And yet both work pretty well in this story, another entry that originated on the kinkmeme. Sarah Jane's reporter's instincts to stick to the facts while having phone sex with Maria make for a scenario that was hotter than I expected. I do wish Ellisbelle had left Maria's dialogue in roman type, because italicizing her dialogue made it harder to read, and there's no reason to use anything other than speech tags to identify the character on the other end of the phone.
Overall: ...And Things That Go Bump in the Night was the standout for me here - it's a funny setup, and a funny story. If you'd rather vote for something with more porn, Awkward is a better choice.
Awkward by Radiantbaby
Written for a "Jenny/Luke first time" prompt on the kinkmeme, this story works surprisingly well, probably because Jenny and Luke are similar characters, with heads full of knowledge but little practical experience. I was slightly squicked by the idea of Luke having a wank every time he overheard the Doctor and Sarah Jane having sex, but personal issues aside, this is a good story, with an amusing (and very in-character) last line for Jenny.
...And Things That Go Bump in the Night by Aeshna
Luke overhears some unusual noises coming from his mother's bedroom and discovers Sarah Jane making good use of a riding crop on Jack Harkness. The dialogue is snappy and funny, and Luke is very much Luke here: fiercely protective of his mother, curious about what's going on, and utterly lacking in tact when it comes to asking questions.
Sarah Jane's Adventures With Pheromone Pollen by Kbox
I'm sure there are some people who like a lot of setup in their PWP, but I'm not one of them, and this story has 2,500+ words of exposition before you get anywhere near the porn. Once you do find the porn, it's preceded by an unlikely conversation between Alan and Sarah Jane in which he calls her a MILF (is that slang even in common use in England?), while Sarah Jane talks about hearing teenage boys whisper that about her behind her back. The acronym creeps me out enough as it is - do you really need a silly and vaguely offensive term to explain you find an older woman attractive? - but then Maria had a set of lines that really bothered me: "I'm not saying I want to see you all sex-mad again ... but ... even when I was mortified by how you were acting, a part of me totally idolized you for it. ... You're who I want to be when I grow up, and ... it's neat that you still have men and boys both, like, literally falling at your feet." Way to project your power fantasies on a 13-year-old girl, author.
R & R by Persiflage_1
This is straightforward Martha/Sarah Jane - the sex is perfectly adequate, but didn't really do much for me. I felt like I was reading about two random women having sex, not Martha and Sarah Jane, though possibly someone who had read the prequel to this and understood the reasons for the characters' attraction would enjoy this more. Style=mine is suggested for those readers who, like me, have problems viewing yellow type on a sky-blue background.
Intergalactic Anytime Minutes by Ellisbelle
Dirty talk: not my kink. "Come for me": a sentence virtually guaranteed to have me clicking the Back button. And yet both work pretty well in this story, another entry that originated on the kinkmeme. Sarah Jane's reporter's instincts to stick to the facts while having phone sex with Maria make for a scenario that was hotter than I expected. I do wish Ellisbelle had left Maria's dialogue in roman type, because italicizing her dialogue made it harder to read, and there's no reason to use anything other than speech tags to identify the character on the other end of the phone.
Overall: ...And Things That Go Bump in the Night was the standout for me here - it's a funny setup, and a funny story. If you'd rather vote for something with more porn, Awkward is a better choice.