Spoils of War [One Piece]

[cosmiko_ling]

Fandom: One Piece
Pairing(s): Bon Clay -> Sanji
Rating: G
Word count: 509
Warning: Spoilers for Arabasta arcDisclaimer: I do not own One Piece or any of its characters. One Piece belongs to Oda Eiichiro-sensei. This is a non-profit fanfiction written by a fan, for the enjoyment of other fans

Comments

[coil]

I don't think you've trouble writing Mr. 2, it seems like a scene that can happen in OP. XD

But I don't get the ending~ XD; *explodes* I can't find that Zoro fic too- *pause; check userinfo* Oh right I'll switch accounts later. o_O All this friending between 4 journals of ours is kidna messy.

Info titbit~: Later in the manga, Mr. 2's... 'followup' is shown in shorts, i.e. those single page things that make up the chapter page, i.e. how Buggy's short story came about. But no, I don't think it matters to your fic.

[cosmiko_ling]

Hehe. Thanks~

Ahaha. The ending... is due to the writer's wilfulness(??). >_>; "wind whistling past ears" + the Merry Go being "far far below" = Mr. 2 is flying through the air + Mr. 2 is high high above... (Sanji kicked Mr. 2 into the sky...)

Oh, I forgot. Sorry for the trouble. I think it's generally ok? Since I don't usually lock posts in this journal.

Ahh ok. Cool! ^^ I'll look forward to seeing it.

[coil]

Indeed, what wilfulness? Anyway I realised why~

"'San-chan'?" He remembered hearing the shouts followed by tickled laughter behind him, before his face met something hard and smooth.

Somehow there I thought the perspective changed to Sanji (for NO good reason, seriously, besides that the "He" immediately following Sanji's words caused it.) So what're the shouts? The Noisy Trio?

[cosmiko_ling]

Oh, 'wilfulness' due to letting Mr 2 be kicked into the sky when they're in the middle of the sea (what happens after that? where does he land?) - I wasn't sure if it was alright logically. Though they always survive. So I guess somehow he will too.

Ah, I see the problem. The ambiguity lies in "'San-chan'?". I meant that to be "the shouts", and yelled by the Noisy Trio. But it works being spoken by Sanji with a quirk of his brow, and then the Noisy Trio laughing in the background, too.