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Glee: Heart and Souls [2/?] (Puck, Rachel)

Jan 25, 2010 11:39

Title: Heart and Soul [Chapter 1]
Author: diamondinsanity
Pairing,Character(s): Rachel, Puck
Rating: R (for language only)
Word Count: 3060
Spoilers: None. Completely and utterly AU.
Summary: Seventeen year old Rachel Berry was on her way to becoming a Broadway star when she died at the exact same time Noah Puckerman was born. And so instead of moving on, she's ( Read more... )

glee, puck/rachel, rachel, puck

Comments 20

sariza January 25 2010, 20:05:35 UTC

I love this! Beyond words, I love it.

Now, Noah, why aren’t you getting better?

Because he’s not ill. And this societal need to impose rules and regulations upon speech and beliefs is completely ridiculous. I could report you. My dads are gay. I know some lawyers who would be appalled at Noah’s treatment here.

He can’t hear you, Berry!

What was that Noah?

You have both their voices down perfect and I'm really looking forward to read more.

Also I feel really stupid for doing but never before have I had the opportunity. So: FIRST!

diamondinsanity January 25 2010, 21:26:22 UTC

-blushes-
Aw, shucks.
Thanks.
And hahaha.
I'm glad you enjoy my story. :D

psychme January 25 2010, 22:07:27 UTC

This continues to be thoroughly engaging. Puck's and Rachel's voices are spot-on. I enjoyed the humor and the way you laid out how things had developed over the last 16 years.

Who else would sing at him nonstop until he got out of bed

Hee! I love her.

Looking forward to more.

diamondinsanity January 25 2010, 23:13:42 UTC

Yes! Thank you! I worry so much about whether or not I'm portraying the characters properly so it makes me feel so much better when I hear I'm doing alright.

Thanks for reading! :)

chrpangel January 25 2010, 22:35:44 UTC

lovin it! can't wait for the next chapter!

cailet_06 January 25 2010, 22:37:53 UTC

Even in this bizarre world (and I mean that in a complimentary manner) you have their voices spot on! Great job!

diamondinsanity January 25 2010, 23:15:00 UTC

haha. Thanks? I'm glad people like my bizarro verse. :D
Thanks for reading!

cailet_06 January 26 2010, 00:03:35 UTC

Oh bizarre is good, bizarre gave us Supernatural and all sorts of other great shows.

diamondinsanity January 26 2010, 00:28:30 UTC

This is very true. Bizarre makes me happy. :D Which is probably why I tried to merge it with Glee. lols.

saya_asakura January 25 2010, 22:38:31 UTC

I love it!!! <3