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cosmic_medusa

We are Both Afraid Before the Dawn Part 4

May 12, 2011 20:48

All his life, Sam had wanted normal. And now that he was surrounded by families who'd known it, he wanted nothing more than to be in some crappy motel with Dean and their Dad.

It made Sam shaky and sick. When Dean finally stepped away to try and barter the use of a landline from a cop, he up and slipped out the door and wound his ( Read more... )

character: john winchester, we are both afraid before the dawn

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lavinialavender May 13 2011, 01:57:56 UTC

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cosmic_medusa May 14 2011, 16:36:27 UTC

***flails!!*****

I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKE!!!!!!

When I read your prompt I thought I know...very bad. Shouldn't have looked. And I tried to fight it, but it would not be ignored. I was nervous answering something by someone I'm such a huge fan of, so I'm super happy you're happy!!!

As for Sal--I have a thing for strong women, and SUPER soft spot for strong southern women: I met several Texas mothers in college and fell in love with all of them. She kind of wrote herself in and I knew better than to tell her no.

**Hugs!!!*** Thank you so much for such a fantastic prompt that I had so much fun with, and as always, your enthusiastic support!

phx69 May 13 2011, 02:05:55 UTC

YES! I loved John`s reaction. Perfect. Absolutely perfect. It was - well... perfect :P a favorite for sure. And, amazing to me since no one got hurt, you still got in enough warmth and wonderful brotherly feelings that an actual hurt was not needed. awesome

cosmic_medusa May 13 2011, 02:12:41 UTC

**Flails about**

Well! Any and all of that is credited to the genius prompt :)

You are such a wonderful commenter...I can't tell you what it means to see your name on each chapter, and I'm ALWAYS psyched to see your comments. Thank you so much for your time and attention! <3!!!!!

marziebarz May 13 2011, 02:27:45 UTC

THIS WAS SO FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!! I completely loved it, the whole time, and it somehow managed to be a h/c fic without anyone actually getting hurt. There were so many little things that were just awesome, but I'm kind of incoherently squeeing and can't actually list them; too busy FLAILING AT THE CUTE!!!!

Sam's minor breakdown about there house was both kind of adorable and also completely reasonable, and I thought Dean handled it perfectly. John's rather noticeable freaking out about his boys was awesome too, because as much as John has done wrong (I think I've said this about Occam's Razor too) he's doing it because he loves his sons.

EXCUSE ME WHILE I FLAIL OVER THE AWESOME MORE =D

We Are Both Afraid Before the Dawn. mdlaw May 13 2011, 02:43:11 UTC

You got this one right. The tornado was so realistic and the aftermath was dead on. Sam and Dean were great together. m :)

borgmama1of5 May 13 2011, 02:44:02 UTC

Absolutely perfect story! Seeing the boys having to deal with a natural disaster, how it unnerved each of them differently, and how they supported each other--completely believable!