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cosmic_medusa

Road From Perdition 2/2

Apr 27, 2013 21:00

Dinner consisted of baked chicken; spinach, parmesan, and tomato salad with olive oil; warm crescent rolls with herbs; Jim’s lone glass of wine; and Dean, attempting to light Jim on fire with his eyes alone ( Read more... )

warning: anxiety, character: dean winchester, warning: drug-abuse, spn, warning: alcohol abuse, character: pastor jim, warning: minor abuse, character: sam winchester, warning: swearing/cursing/flipping off, 3 kings verse, warning: depression, h/c, character: castiel, warning: trigger

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ceedeeandco April 28 2013, 04:31:02 UTC

So glad to see this 'verse again! Heavy stuff, but there's catharsis. :-)

...I have to ask, have we heard the backstory of the cat lady and the MRI? If so, it's completely slipped my mind.

cosmic_medusa April 28 2013, 04:50:50 UTC

Haha, sorry, it's way back as a slight mention in Backdraft (http://cosmic-medusa.livejournal.com/24726.html) where Cas tells Dean that a lady brought her cat into the ER and it escaped while the staff were trying to explain they don't treat animals. That's my own issue with gaps in my posting :)

ayane42 April 28 2013, 05:01:14 UTC

awesome!! just awesome!!

i love Dean and Cas's relationship, it's so perfect :)

cosmic_medusa April 28 2013, 05:11:56 UTC

Aww, glad you liked it! I enjoy writing them :)

kazluvsbooks April 28 2013, 05:14:05 UTC

Aww.. so nice to see some more of your verse!
I love all the mushiness and the brother banter.

Recc'd your verse here:
http://lipglosskaz.tumblr.com/post/49065867564/title-three-kings-verse-author-cosmic-medusa

cosmic_medusa April 28 2013, 16:27:04 UTC

Oh wow, thank you!!!!! What a sweet, and glowing rec!!!! :D

mentholpixie April 28 2013, 05:46:24 UTC

This was so great! I love where you've taken Jim as a character and the conversation between Dean and Sam at the end was so sweet. I particularly liked that Dean wasn't willing to put a label on his and Cas' relationship. It was all incredible! Can't wait to see more in this 'verse!``5\

cosmic_medusa April 30 2013, 01:17:11 UTC

Thank you! Hopefully I'll have some more time to write until school starts up again :)

x_luciole April 28 2013, 10:31:37 UTC

It's so good to see a new story in this verse!
I love how you wrote Dean in this! He's so perfectly 'Dean'! And Sam and Cas's relationship is great!
I'd love to read Dean explaining them why he resented Jim but i'm not sure if you already wrote it in part 1, I'm gonna go read it again!

cosmic_medusa April 30 2013, 01:05:56 UTC

Hi! Yeah it's in the first part, but it's been awhile...Dean was mad when Jim was giving last rites to Sam in the hospital, and he never quite got past him calling CPS. He's coming around now. :) Thank you!

x_luciole April 30 2013, 10:39:42 UTC

I just went back to read part 1 again and I didn't see any explanation. But maybe I didn't explain what i meant very clearly. I do know why Dean is mad at Jim, I remembered that, but I wondered if he would explain it to Sam and Cas someday (or if he already had in part 1 and that would mean I didn't understand something...that's a possibility!)
Anyway, i would love to read such a thing!

cosmic_medusa April 30 2013, 11:36:21 UTC

Ooooooh I see! I had actually intended that to be part of this story, but as I worked on it, it just didn't feel natural. That's not uncommon for me: things play out as I write (e.g., Backdraft and When Sammy Met Cas were one story originally, but as I worked on them it felt they belonged separate). So it'll probably crop up in a later edition. In the meantime, Sam assumes Dean still doesn't like Jim because of the CPS biz, and Cas just knows that "Jim was being dicktastic."