The Hours 2/?

[cosmic_medusa]

Jim had just finished packing the last of his things when he heard a truck pulling up front. Seconds later, his front door burst open, and a red-faced, swaying John Winchester blinked at him.

“John?” Jim asked.

“You,” John growled, and sprung forward, fist outstretched.

“Calm down!” Jim barked, grabbing his unsteady fist and swinging. “You

Comments

[usaexpat101]

well written as usual :) The image of little Dean taking care of his drunken/passed out Dad and his baby brother and the "watching over their little family till morning" great line...

[zara_zee]

This made me cry...as always you capture the interpersonal dynamics of all the characters so perfectly. Fantastic use of flashbacks. This was a stunning piece of writing.

[nickitynackity]

Look at me, commenting twice in a month. First, I was thrilled to see another post so soon. Second, how can you leave us like this? Now I just need more! I'm glad you were able to continue this, I want to know more about Sam's hospital stay and recovery!
Hope you are able to write again soon!

[cinderseed]

I was doing OK until your last part, poor little Dean dealing with an upset Sammy and a drunk and passed out John trying to hold his family together. You really know how to write an emotionally charged story. I hope you don't make us wait too long until the next segment.

[familybizness]

Hi there, have you seen THE MISSING PIECE OF MY HEART?

God, I love this.