Apr 18, 2006 07:56
fandom: inuyasha, fanfic collection: transience, character: kaede, fanfic: drabble, fanfic, fanfic collection: ai no kakera, character: higurashi kagome, character: kikyou, pairing: inuyashaxkagome
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Very little critique on the first one:
"As a now ordinary human man, he had nor the ability nor the need to wield it any longer."
I'd have said "he had neither the ability nor the need..." the first nor was jarring to me.
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(I prefer reading about InuxKag as well. The Kikyou one was a very... rare venture for me. XD )
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