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[CHAPTERFIC] Cerulean Chapter Six (Axis Powers Hetalia)

Nov 01, 2010 23:07

Title: Cerulean [FF.NET] [ Writing Journal Previous Chapters ]
Pairing: Main: AmericaxEngland. Minor: CanadaxUkraine, SwedenxFinland, DenmarkxNorway, PolandxLithuania, SpainxSouth Italy.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama/Alternate Universe
Word Count: 4,125
Summary: Arthur is spending a normal summer at his father's beach house in Cape Cod ( Read more... )

pairing: americaxengland, fanfic: cerulean, fanfic: chapter fic, character: england, fandom: axis powers hetalia, character: america, fanfic

Comments 30

osco_blue_fairy November 2 2010, 05:06:54 UTC

FLYING MINT BUNNY!!! Ahem...anyway...

Wonderful chapter! I really like how light-hearted and whimsical you're keeping this, it's truly enjoyable to read! Arthur and his mum are adorable and I enjoyed their interaction, though I think it would be interesting if the whole Chime child idea was expanded on a bit. It's interesting and I don' think I've ever heard of that bit of folklore before. ^_^ The inner myhtology-geek in me demands more, haha!

<3 keep up the great work!

haro March 5 2011, 05:28:37 UTC

Flying Mint Bunny is fierce, yo.

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed their interaction. As for Arthur's sight, we still don't have some answers, so it will definitely be investigated further.

<3

galeaya November 2 2010, 05:12:35 UTC

Yay update! XD Alfred's going to meet mommy, eh.. XD

haro March 5 2011, 05:29:00 UTC

You bet he is. XD

Thanks!

onmyoji_youkai November 2 2010, 05:23:40 UTC

*squeals* I was waiting for this chapter and i'm very happy to read it. As usual, I loved and enjoyed it~!

Can't wait for the next chapter~!

haro March 5 2011, 05:29:27 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

marimo_blogger November 2 2010, 09:02:18 UTC

For a moment I thought Arthur was going to keep the fact that he was dating a merman a secret from his mother... Thankfully he didn't! >w<
and Gawain!! baawwww I love how you incorporate other characters in the story, even the flying mint bunny!

Can't wait to see how the story goes :) As much as I would love to see Arthur's mother meeting Alfred, I'm curious as how the rest of Alfred's pod will react when they meet Arthur.

Hope you are well out of your writer's block. Thank you for the update!

haro March 5 2011, 05:30:27 UTC

Haha, it was a tough decision for him, but he decided to come clean in the end. And yessss, I had fun bringing flying mint bunny in. XD

Thanks so much for reviewing! I can promise a meeting between Alfred's pod and Arthur, but you'll have to wait and see how it goes!

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haro March 5 2011, 09:52:18 UTC

Thank you so much for your thoughtful review, Lumos. ♥

I enjoyed writing his mother and creating her, so I'm glad you like her as well! And yes, the pod dynamic is a ton of fun as well, then again I am such a fan of the Nordics.

You would be right in assuming that. The merpeople are kind of traditional, and generally they have to 'give their blessing' for a marriage or reunion to occur, hence Berwald and Tino running away from their pods. And for now indeed. XDD

YES. YOU CAUGHT THAT. I love putting little canon parallels in. As for the burger... well. ;)

Lastly, awwee thanks. That scene put warm fuzzies in my head, so I'm pleased it did for you as well.