[CHAPTERFIC] Cerulean Chapter Two (Axis Powers Hetalia)

[cosmic_dare]

Title: Cerulean [FF.NET] [ Writing Journal Previous Chapters ]
Pairing: Main: AmericaxEngland. Minor: CanadaxUkraine, SwedenxFinland, DenmarkxNorway, SpainxSouth Italy.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama/Alternate Universe
Word Count: 4,159
Summary: Arthur is spending a normal summer at his father's beach house in Cape Cod, when he

Comments

[pantstacular]

This was an awesome chapter. I really like the bits of world building and set up you did here. America is still freaking adorable as ever. I just love his curiosity and how sweet and awesome he is. I like the way you presented the pods and the characters. (Denmark and Norway ♥ oh them XD ) And America's interactions with Canada where great. I really love how you write them and I curious to see where the plot line goes with Russia's tribe. I do really liked the awkward tension between Russia and America I thought you presented it extremely well. I liked the comments he made to Belarus XD I definitely see America doing that (AND THE WALRUS THING? YES XD) Just so many wonderful things you do with the merpeople. You really worked hard get the dynamics down and you did amazing job at describing what we need to know about how the move and their cultural. I can't wait to learn more about them

[pillowsofwind]

I've been horribly lazy about reading fanfiction lately and I hardly ever keep up with chapter fics, but I think I might have to for this one. I'm such a nerd for merfolk... especially when combined with fandom. I absolutely adore the way you write Alfred. Despite the fact that he's a being so far removed from his canon, his personality is spot-on, I think. His incessant curiosity is adorable.

[haro]

I am also a major merfolk nerd. Yay, nerds unite! Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it, especially my America characterization. <33333

[lily_winterwood]

"Frog" on the Caller ID....

I LOVE THIS.

[haro]

Indeed. XD

Thank you!

[kasumicc]

Oh, the kiss on the cheek was adorable ♥ And I loved Alfred and Ivan's mutual disliking xD

A camera. I don't think that will work. But then, if it doesn't, I can't wait to see Arthur's reaction x'D
Will be waiting for the next chapter! ^^

[haro]

Thank you! Haha, some things never change, I guess?

Hehe. Well, you'll see about the camera. XD

[otakufox23]

Ah~ I'm so glad this got updated. I read the first chapter and thought "This is going to be awesome!" And you know what, IT IS! *squee*

Your characterizations are spot on. Al and Arthur are just so perfect. I love how you're incorporating lore and making it your own. Very clever. Keep it up!

This is seriously my new favorite fic.

[haro]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it eeeh.

And that means a lot- both the characterizations and the lore. I was really hoping that those both worked well.

Awww. Thanks. ♥