The Ghost of Christmas Not to Be

[corvus_imbrifer]

Written for the Supernatural Fiction Community:

http://community.livejournal.com/spn_christmas/389.html

Comments

[popmusicjunkie]

Excellent story.

[iamstealthyone]

Great story. Very interesting plot, and it ran the gamut of emotions, from the good banter sprinkled throughout to the delicious angst during Dean’s awful “dream.” You captured both boys very well here.

Favorite lines:

They installed cameras, ran cable, checked alarms, asked questions either subtlety (Sam) or tactlessly (Dean).

*g*

“Yeah, it may take some special attention from Santa’s elf to get some of them to unwrap their presents.”

*snickers* Dean, Dean, Dean, how we love thee.

“But you can. Know why?” Sam was using the soft voice. Dean loved the soft voice. He’d bet on the soft voice against any iceberg in the North Atlantic.

Yeah, I love that voice, too. *sighs*

“I have his heart.”

“Ah, jeez.” Dean cleared his throat. After a moment with grim silence, he twisted to look for the waitress. “Does this place serve beer?”

I love this twist to the story, about Celeste having George’s heart, and I love Dean’s reaction.

Sam nodded, empathy glowing like a hearth fire. Dean tried to sip his coffee in a sympathetic manner.I

[vanillafluffy]

*worships you and offers virtual chocolate* You've nailed the oddness that is Christmas in the Sunshine State. Awesome!

[unhobbityhobbit]

Oh that dream just about killed me. So achingly sad and Dean's reaction to it is just right.

Lovely, touching story. Thank you for sharing it.

[mellaithwen]

ah the christmas fics begin! Yaaay

brilliantly done. angsty, but wonderful banter and the glimpse of the future :( awesome story