Silent Promises / Oneshot

May 25, 2009 21:16

Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Genre: Canon
Rating: Adult
Authors: cornflake2912
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: The characters belong to Annie Proulx. I’m not earning any money from this and am writing just for fun.
Feedback: Thank you :)
Authors’ Notes: I’d like to thank Patricia, hellspark72 for her professional help :) *hugs & tea* !!

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swathed_in_blue May 25 2009, 19:32:43 UTC
This is so beautiful!
I love the kiss on the forehead. ♥ :)

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cornflake2912 May 26 2009, 19:46:44 UTC
Thanks a lot for reading and letting me know :)

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enoughtohurt May 25 2009, 19:35:26 UTC
**SPEECHLESS**

Before Jack could say anything else, before he could vent his anger and give it to Ennis straight he felt Ennis’ lips soft and tender on the middle of his forehead. And it was as if this kiss expressed all the things that Ennis couldn’t say, didn’t dare say. This kiss seemed to quietly whisper it all straight to Jack's heart.

I’m glad you’re here.

I’m sorry that I can’t make your dreams come true.

I don’t want to lose you again.

Totally beautiful and delicate, babe. I didn’t know whether smile or cry. ♥

Love your writing. Thank you so much.

Big hugs.

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cornflake2912 May 26 2009, 19:47:26 UTC
Thank you, Tammy.

I'm glad to be able to make you feel so many emotions.

Love,
Steffi

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mira986 May 25 2009, 19:40:49 UTC
Beautiful. ♥

Love you hon.

Mira

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cornflake2912 May 26 2009, 19:47:54 UTC
Love you, too, Mira.

Hope you are doing fine.

Kiss,
Steffi

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carmenmariabs May 25 2009, 19:47:49 UTC
Ennis has always expressed with little words.

Knows how to do it in other ways.
Meet Jack, Jack knows.
Just continue to fight ... it is looking Ennis.
Carmen

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cornflake2912 May 26 2009, 19:48:30 UTC
Thank you, Carmen.
Your icons are always hilarious :)

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soulan May 25 2009, 20:09:32 UTC
I've always wondered how that night went. That was beautiful, and the kiss on the forehead seemed very natural and right for that moment. But I bet it happened only once, because I can't imagine Jack getting consolation from it a second time.

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cornflake2912 May 26 2009, 21:02:13 UTC
Thank you, soulan.
Yes, I'm sure that it was a special moment. Jack lost his hopes with every come together after that. *sigh*

Have a good day!

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