Focus

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Comments

[jlly_coppercorn]

Glad they worked out those boundaries :)
Antonio is getting a little stalker-y.
Good job.

[ayumidah]

I'm not sure it's stalkery, he just wanted to spend time with her and thought it was something sweet, but at least he knows better now ;) Thanks!

[cedarwolfsinger]

I read Antonio as getting somewhat overbearing, and Liz giving in to him. I am not certain I would *want* them to be together long-term in that case.

[ayumidah]

Thank you for reading.

[amri]

Nice interpretation of the week's theme. I wish I hadn't read others' comments before I read the entry. I have no idea why since I typically don't.

After reading it a couple of times to form my own opinion, I believe I agree with cedar. She does sound like she caves when he gets a bit sulky and weird. I liked it though and it did provoke further thought after I read it which is a good thing.

[ayumidah]

Thank you, I guess we'll have to see how their relationship evolves in the next two drabbles.

[ayumidah]

Thank you!

[missflyer]

I can relate to Liz -- when I'm focused, I'm focused, and I don't much like being interrupted either, even for someone being really sweet and bringing me food. Glad they worked it out though; communication really is key!

[ayumidah]

Me too, haha. Thank you for reading and commenting!