Star Trek Fic: It's Not Going to Stop ('Til You Wise Up) - Chekov/Sulu, Adult

[cordelianne]

I am thrilled - and totally filled with nerves - to finally post my first Chekov/Sulu fic.

Title: It's Not Going to Stop ('Til You Wise Up)
Author: cordelianne
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing(s): Chekov/Sulu
Rating: Adult
Word count: 7,534
Disclaimer: Sadly not mine, in any way.
Summary: Sulu and Chekov aren’t friends. In fact, Sulu suspects that Chekov hates

Comments

[cordelianne]

Oh yay, I'm glad you share my love of pushy Pavel, he's just so fun. And poor confused Sulu - I kept feeling bad for him when he'd have no idea what was going on. And yay for hot! Thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed! :D

heee, that's a great icon!

[kawasakininja]

This was awesome! I laughed so much, probably at every second line. Your Sulu and his light sarcasm was amusing as hell. Loved him! And the crazy wonderful dynamics he had with Chekov. I really enjoyed him as well, how he appeared confused at social situations but very adamant and determined in everything else. Sulu's reaction to being bad boy, dumbstruck at first then almost wetting himself at the notion, hi hi. It is so easy to see him like this nice guy who kind of remains dorky at heart and still not believing people seeing him as something else. Together they were lovely melting hot and it was a real pleasure to read this. Thank you.

[cordelianne]

Oh yay, I'm so happy you found the fic funny - I love writing humour in my fics, it's just a lot of fun and it's also what I love to read. It's great to hear that the scenario worked - I especially also love the idea of Sulu seeing himself as a dork who's not that cool. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it! Thanks! :D

[hollycomb]

I love the idea of Pavel being bratty to protect himself and Sulu just trying and trying and trying to not let it bother him and then just KISSING HIM, of course, ahh, this was so great! :D

[cordelianne]

I really enjoy difficult and bratty Pavel who is suspicious of Sulu, and then poor confused Sulu not knowing what's going on - so I'm glad you enjoyed that too! haha, yes, the kissing, Pavel is just so hard to resist. I'm very happy that you enjoyed! Thanks! :D

[ljismahname]

Oh gosh haha this is amazing! Chekov thinking that Sulu is a "manwhore" XD. Plus it was HOT. I love that Chekov got very well, Chekov, during sex and being all "do it now!!!".
“I want you around for more than just sex,” Sulu sighs, “okay?”
This made me go "d'awwww!" out loud.

[cordelianne]

Oh yay, I'm pleased that you enjoyed the humour and found it hot! Also, it's great that you enjoyed Chekov being so pushy during sex - that was so much fun to write. And a d'awwww is all good in my books! Thanks! :D

[cordelianne]

Your comment makes me very happy because I really enjoyed writing Sulu's narrative voice so it's great to know you liked it and the awkwardness. haha, I love writing awkwardness, I have plans for HSAU writing because I can't resist the awkward! I'm so pleased you enjoyed. Thanks! :D