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cordelianne October 3 2006, 18:58:26 UTC
mwahaha! I am evil!!! *g*

I'm delighted that you like my Mac voice! And yay to the best line you've read in a while!!! *dances* hee - Veronica is so smarter than everybody!! And I'm glad you liked Logan saving Weevil! ;) Thanks!! *g*

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ebonypsyche October 3 2006, 18:34:16 UTC
So let's see...
I'm loving on the Mac.

Logan snark is always good (comparing to Cordy makes my day).

And as a bounus you leave me waiting and refreshing while I know it's going to be another week.

Good job

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cordelianne October 3 2006, 19:00:53 UTC
I'm glad to hear that you're continuing to enjoy the story! Yay to loving Mac, it's been fun to include her in the story. In some ways Logan reminds me of Cordelia so it was fun to draw that comparison. And yay to wanting more!! Thanks! *g*

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pikapika217 October 3 2006, 22:56:53 UTC

’s going to work.” Mac looked up from her computer but her fingers continued to fly over the keyboard. “Veronica’s good at plans. And I’m not just saying that because I get to stay in the safety of the car while the plan’s enacted.”

Veronica grinned. “Feel free to keep the compliments coming. Does wonders for a girl’s self-esteem.” She adjusted an imaginary tie. “And we don’t want girls with low self-esteem. It just leads to toplessness.”

“Nothing wrong with that,” Spike said absently as he adjusted a crossbow. He tossed it to Xander and yanked another one out of their car’s trunk.

“For some reason that makes me nostalgic for Wallace.” Veronica sighed. “Stupid basketball camp.”

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD great exchange.

Spike gave him a look. And not the Sex now look that made Xander the good kind of weak in the knees. More like You git ( ... )

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cordelianne October 4 2006, 05:27:50 UTC
Yay quotes! I'm pleased you liked those parts! Yay intellect and subtext! Yay indeed! :D The 'backup' line is a bit of a shout out to Backup the dog! I'm happy you're enjoying and are looking forward to more! Thanks! *g*

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vinniebatman October 3 2006, 23:44:38 UTC
Eep!
Oh man, I sense a worried, then confused because he's worried Weevil in the future.
Can't wait for more!

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cordelianne October 4 2006, 05:37:56 UTC
Definitely - this'll be a confusing time for Weevil! I'm glad you're looking forward to more. Thanks! *g*

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yourlibrarian October 4 2006, 03:19:22 UTC
Showdown at the bowling alley! Bowling for vamps!

Liked the scene of VM tasering a vamp as she goes. Rather reminds me of Buffy brushing Doc aside at the tower.

“For some reason that makes me nostalgic for Wallace.” Veronica sighed. “Stupid basketball camp.”

It'll be more than worth it for the look on his face when she tells him about all this after the fact.

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cordelianne October 4 2006, 05:43:46 UTC
hee - I'm glad you liked the bowling alley setting! I love how comfortable Veronica is with using her taser so it was fun to have her calmly tasering the vamp - and that is a neat parallel with Buffy brushing Doc aside. And I'm sure Wallace would love to hear that!! Thanks! *g*

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