AtS Ficlet: Dreaming (Angel & Wesley)

[cordelianne]

Inspired by this post by entrenous88 and its silly conversation about the lack of mermaid fic in the BtVS/AtS fandom, I - weirdly - wrote this serious ficlet. It's set around the time of AtS "Deep Down":

Comments

[lettered]

Loved the Connor sinking into blood image, with Angel being sunk under the sea. Nice job!

[cordelianne]

Thanks for the lovely feedback! I've never written in this style before or anything quite this dark, so I'm glad that the Connor and blood image worked for you. :)

[untitleddemo]

Ooh! What a neat take on mermaid fic. Very lyrical and evocative images created.

He gasped as Connor vanished leaving his hands covered with blood.

I liked the darkness to this fic and the style you used was really interesting.

In the main room Fred was dancing, slowly turing in a graceful pirouette. He could hear Cordy laughing.

Pretty. *hugs*

[cordelianne]

Thanks for your lovely feedback and for noting which passages you liked! This is a new style for me (I'm normally all about the dialogue), so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Very lyrical and evocative images created.
Wow! That's a great compliment.:)

*hugs*

[ozma914]

Wow -- you actually pulled off an Angel-Mermaid fic! And with great style, too. Wonderful imagery.

[cordelianne]

Thanks for your nice feedback! I'm glad you liked the style and imagery. :)

[likeadeuce]

*sniffle*

great dream sequences, and definitely an interesting twist on the genre!

[cordelianne]

*hands you a tissue*

Thanks for reading! I'm pleased that you liked the dream sequences, I enjoyed writing them. :)

[vampirefever]

Wesley as a merman - I love it.
*wants more* <--- I'm such a greedy child *g*

[cordelianne]

Thanks for your great feedback! I'm very happy that you loved it!!

*wants more* <--- I'm such a greedy child *g*

hee! I wrote this up quickly in a comment on entrenous88's LJ so I've left the option open to expand this. So there could be more? :)

When I was posting this I realized in horror that I have no Angel and Wesley together icons, and now seeing your icon I'm desiring sexy Wes icons. Any suggestions on where to get some?

[vampirefever]

Mmmm.... Wesley icons.

You could start by looking through ats_icons

[cordelianne]

Thanks! Need sexy Wes icons now!! :)