Blind

Jan 09, 2010 11:28

Summary: Written for the Fandom Gives Back charity auction. After Bella is turned into a vampire, her perfect marriage to Edward falls apart. But as time passes, their eyes begin to clear and their paths realign. Complete.

Rated: T

Blind )

edward/bella, blind

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decolletages January 9 2010, 19:49:28 UTC
beautiful, as always.

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like_torches January 9 2010, 20:07:54 UTC
So now that I'm not helping I can point out the things that I secretly fangirled over:

- The opening scene. I LOVE it so much.
- Your Rosalie. So fantastic.
- “You’re not the only person that lost their spouse nine months ago, Edward.” I might have told you this already, but I adore this line so much. It was like being punched in the gut, but in a good way :)
- The whole last part. I love your Edward voice a lot a lot a lot.

Love you :)

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buried_alive55 January 9 2010, 20:52:50 UTC
I loved the Edward voice! I thought it would be Bella cuz I saw a tweet you wrote about your Bella voice, but I was pleasantly surprised.

I like how Edward starts out being so absorbed in his own thoughts, guilt, and self-pity that he's almost completely oblivious to what Bella is actually going through.

I really enjoyed the Edward/Alice interaction. I've always liked your Alice.

The symbolism, the way things played out and ended was just perfect.

Thanks for volunteering the time to write this!

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ladydea January 9 2010, 23:53:24 UTC
Love this oodles.

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heart_shape January 10 2010, 02:05:54 UTC
gorgeous and well-crafted, just like always. ♥

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