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kf4vkp June 12 2013, 14:17:17 UTC
Very well done. I enjoyed this take on the prompt.

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copyright1983 June 12 2013, 19:28:20 UTC
:) Thanks for reading!

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whipchick June 12 2013, 15:07:00 UTC
What an interesting peek into this post-apocalyptic world! makes me wonder where this story will go!

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copyright1983 June 12 2013, 19:28:57 UTC
Wasn't intending this to be the start of a serial, but I suppose I could... :) Thanks for reading!

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cheshire23 June 13 2013, 22:43:47 UTC
Oh, I hope you do! :)

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alien_writings June 12 2013, 19:29:40 UTC
Interesting take on the prompt! :)

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copyright1983 June 13 2013, 03:33:32 UTC
:) Thanks for reading!

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agirlnamedluna June 12 2013, 20:18:30 UTC
Very poetic, I liked your take on the topic :)

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copyright1983 June 13 2013, 03:34:08 UTC
It somehow seems my prose is more poetic than my poetry. :) Thanks for reading!

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roina_arwen June 13 2013, 02:01:04 UTC
Interesting premise - seems like there have been quite a few darker-type pieces this round. :)

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copyright1983 June 13 2013, 03:34:40 UTC
The topic does tend to nudge people in a certain direction sometimes. :) Thanks for reading!

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