LJ Idol Week 4--Topic: "Mistaken Identity"

Oct 16, 2008 20:47



"You Are You"

Musical soundtrack: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pKf0DgpDYh4

Who are you?

Faced with that question, what is your first reaction? How do you define yourself? It seems so easy at times: I could probably rattle off a quick description of myself in less than a minute. It would probably include things like, "I'm really just a normal guy." ( Read more... )

pen to paper, mirror mirror

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brightflashes October 17 2008, 14:43:09 UTC
I really appreciate your willingness to write this in "stream of consciousness"/prose/poetry. It has a sense of authenticity about it and also a wonderful rhythm. Great job! :)

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copyright1983 October 17 2008, 15:59:10 UTC
Thanks! Admittedly, it's not my strongest style, but part of the point of this competition (at least for me) is to stretch myself as a writer, and this seemed like a good place for it. (Plus, when I heard the topic, I really wanted to incorporate the song.)

Thanks for reading!

Mike

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shadowwolf13 October 17 2008, 16:34:24 UTC
Great job!

Very deep post, I love the sentiment. :)

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copyright1983 October 18 2008, 01:17:50 UTC
Thanks for reading! --Mike

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daffodigirl October 17 2008, 18:29:00 UTC
Wonderful post! Like the fact that you are willing to stretch yourself. Wish I was brave enough to do so. :)

You've got my vote!

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copyright1983 October 18 2008, 01:18:26 UTC
Well, I knew I could count on that. :)

Here's hoping it's enough.

Mike

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jenandbronze October 17 2008, 18:46:27 UTC
I hope to be brave an stretch myself as I learn more about myself as well, as a person. It isn't easy, but I loved the words of wisdom you gave in this entry... Embrace yourself, had a great ending to it. I am not the type to get into poetry so much, as it is a hard language or me to get into, but the way you woven it with images about yourself and the advice you gave to others worked quite well in this instance.

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copyright1983 October 18 2008, 01:19:45 UTC
Thanks. Like I mentioned above, I just started with the song lyrics and let it evolve from there.

Thanks for reading!

Mike

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solstice_singer October 17 2008, 19:08:55 UTC
This was wonderful! Very nicely done.

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copyright1983 October 18 2008, 01:20:00 UTC
Thanks for reading! --Mike

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