Comments | copycatgirl: Scales- Part One: Slipping

copycatgirl

Scales- Part One: Slipping

Feb 09, 2008 22:11

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scales, fanfiction, angst, fic: pg-13, jack/ianto, anorexia, torchwood

Comments 22

its_my_coffee February 9 2008, 22:54:41 UTC

OMG. I wanted to cry. Such a good story, cant wait to read the rest of it.XXX

copycatgirl February 10 2008, 08:42:56 UTC

Thank you :)

I'll be uploading part two soon enough.

wicca_faith_fi February 9 2008, 22:56:22 UTC

OMG I love this! Please tell me there will be a part two!

copycatgirl February 10 2008, 08:43:13 UTC

Thank you
And yes, there will, and part three

kenjinoda07 February 9 2008, 23:04:48 UTC

copycatgirl February 10 2008, 08:43:37 UTC

Yes, there will be more
Thank you

laureen February 9 2008, 23:25:12 UTC

I. Just. Wow. Really, this is... this is good. I feel so bad for Iantoand I just want to cry. I hope there will be more posted soon. If only so I can read (hopefully) a happy ending.

copycatgirl February 10 2008, 08:44:10 UTC

I will post more soon, don't worry
Thank you

lizhowhp February 9 2008, 23:48:44 UTC

I can't quite see Ianto being anorexic because of his appearance; a great deal of anorexics see not eating as a form of control, and I think Ianto would fall into that catagory more likely than the other. And I'll admit that the whole retcon scene seemed a bit iffy.

Otherwise, though, there was a nice flow throughout the piece, and no grammatical mistakes that I observed. You write very nicely.

copycatgirl February 10 2008, 08:45:21 UTC

It's sort of both. But I don't really know what I'm getting at, I didn't really think about it when I wrote it last year. If I was to completely re write the whole thing, his intentions would be clearer. And some of the crap stuff would be half decent.

Thank you :)