Burning Man

Aug 24, 2009 23:09

Title: Burning Man
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Sheppard, team
Warnings: No major spoilers
Recipient: kriadydragon
Prompt: Sheppard H/C; Sheppard in a humiliating/overwhelming situation (not non-con or gender-switch), but one that isn't funny, and the team or one of the team having to stand up for him or, at least, try to make him more comfortable (can be on ( Read more... )

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kristen999 August 25 2009, 21:05:51 UTC
This was what the doctor ordered. I know for John being so helpless would be a huge distress, but his team protected his dignity and stood by him through the worst part of the illness, of course I love it when the team wouldn't let the elder near Sheppard.

Love protective Team!

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coolbreeze1 August 26 2009, 02:14:32 UTC
Thanks! I can just imagine John being completely mortified at losing control, even if it's from being sick, and having it witnessed by others. You can't go wrong with protective team either! Glad you liked it. :)

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x_erikah_x August 25 2009, 23:51:27 UTC
Poor, poor Shep needing some team love.

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coolbreeze1 August 26 2009, 02:14:52 UTC
He needed a lot of team love in this one. Thanks for reading! :D

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coolbreeze1 August 26 2009, 02:15:46 UTC
Thank you! I was a little worried that the mental elements wouldn't come across, so glad to hear they did.

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linziday August 26 2009, 00:35:36 UTC
Oh, that was excellent! Perfect teamyness. The whump made me cringe. And the writing was fantastic to boot!

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coolbreeze1 August 26 2009, 02:16:03 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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mangst August 26 2009, 02:05:47 UTC
This is perfect.

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coolbreeze1 August 26 2009, 02:16:12 UTC
Thanks! :)

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