Outside the Wall (1/2)

[coolbreeze1]

Title: Outside the Wall
Recipient: sgafan
Rating: PG-13/Gen
Word count: 15,400
Warnings: Nothing really. Some violence, brief language, no spoilers
Summary: An encounter with alien technology brings Sheppard’s fight for survival to a whole different level.

A/N: Huge thank you to my beta, everybetty!

Comments

[tridget]

This is a seriously cool whump. The loss of the sense of touch is fascinating. I am enjoying seeing Sheppard learn to adapt and use other senses to compensate as best he can.

ETA - Great cliffhanger, too.

[linzi5]

Really exciting and tense first part! The loss of sensation is really beautifully described and is an unusual whump to inflict - and I love it! Poor Shep. Looking forward to part 2. Well done! :)x