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[pmntmrkrwrtng]

Ok, first time posting ANYTHING....it's just a quick little angsty poem thing. *hides under computer desk*

It's sweat and frustration
Passion and melding
Hands gripping and voices rising
It's writhing and sorrow
Bliss and Armageddon
Legs straining and voices hushed
It's bruises and enlightenment
Greed and impulsion
Lips touching and voices choked

Comments

[shewoe]

Gorgeous!

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
Im glad you liked it :D

[loveisdance01]

this was fabulous! sooo beautiful. write more please!!!

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

*squeaks incoherently* Thank you very much!! :D

And I think I will...

[afro_kid]

I wunt more! :D

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

Hopefully some Cookstro-shaped inspiration strikes me so I can write more!

THANK YOU SO MUCH!! :D

[elenauial]

I like that, I love poetry and you used a lot of excellent words here.

I really think you conveyed your message well, great job!

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

THANK YOU!

:D