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Lotrips in past, present and future

Mar 05, 2003 00:08

Title: The Lost Boys
Fandom: Lotrips
Author: Buffonia@ragingvenus.com
Site: Like People Do
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Because time can't be stopped
Disclaimer: Fiction. M'kay?
Notes: Written for the multi-tense challenge at contrelamontre

( Dom never wanted to be a fireman. )

lotrips

Comments 6

lux__aeterna March 4 2003, 21:28:24 UTC

*smiles* I like this a lot. I like the references to the Lost Boys- never wanted to grow up vs not being allowed to grow up, and then Orlando who hovers in between them, out of their reach but within their grasp.
*grins* Very lovely indeed. Thankee.

qthelights March 5 2003, 01:10:55 UTC

This was lovely :) I love the way you've given us slices of each person and then tied them all together at the end. Plus the individual personalities you give 'the boys' are great. Enjoyed this!

pigeongirl99 March 5 2003, 01:13:01 UTC

Wow honey, this was intense!

There's pain here, and disillusionment, and heat, and all good things.

Really liked it.

anonymous March 5 2003, 06:19:12 UTC

Oh, this was lovely. *smiles* Excellent job.

One quick note, though... on behalf of zarah5, all fics need to have a pairing label... whether it's Dom/Lij/Orli or just a simple note that it would spoil it.

gabbyhope March 6 2003, 06:11:35 UTC

It's a connect-the-dots, and that's simply marvelous. How everything connects, past to present, character to character, story lines... very impressive. And I adore the glimpses into their individual lives: Dom's not wanting to grow up and Elijah wanting to not be held back and Orli's obsession with thrills. Little snippets, and yet it speaks volumes about them. I'm envious, how you can say such important ground breaking things with so few words.

A wonderful read, and great addition to the improv.