Curse you for leaving it off like that! And curse time-limits!
GUH.
Dom stretching guh That image of Elijah flashing into Billy's mind guh Billy doing his thang guh the details guh the hotness guh and Dom’s eyebrow was raised and he was smiling that crooked shit-eating grin, but his eyes registered surprise. One big motherfucking GUH.
I love you forever and ever amen.
Seriously, though. You wrote the details wonderfully. I can't believe this is your first try at R. You filthy little thing, you. ;) [smooches] This was fabulous, hon. Give us MORE!
But...if you push, I might be able to give more. I feel it could use a "sequel", but I'm not sure my writing is up to you. Sooo glad you liked it and you "guh"ed at it since, really, it was for you. :-D
I think the approriate reaction here is...*thud*. That was me being floored by the sheer heat and ohmygod-ness of that wonderful piece.
Adored this:
But something about the phrase, about the watching caught Billy. It was an image. An image of Elijah, pale and naked and glimmering, on his hands and knees on the patterned tile kitchen floor, and Billy behind him, driving into him, and Dom’s stormy grey eyes, which flashed hungrily here and there, drinking it in.
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Curse you for leaving it off like that! And curse time-limits!
GUH.
Dom stretching guh That image of Elijah flashing into Billy's mind guh Billy doing his thang guh the details guh the hotness guh and Dom’s eyebrow was raised and he was smiling that crooked shit-eating grin, but his eyes registered surprise. One big motherfucking GUH.
I love you forever and ever amen.
Seriously, though. You wrote the details wonderfully. I can't believe this is your first try at R. You filthy little thing, you. ;) [smooches] This was fabulous, hon. Give us MORE!
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But...if you push, I might be able to give more. I feel it could use a "sequel", but I'm not sure my writing is up to you. Sooo glad you liked it and you "guh"ed at it since, really, it was for you. :-D
the details are everything.
Mmmml...filth. Love filth. And you! :-D
~L
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Adored this:
But something about the phrase, about the watching caught Billy. It was an image. An image of Elijah, pale and naked and glimmering, on his hands and knees on the patterned tile kitchen floor, and Billy behind him, driving into him, and Dom’s stormy grey eyes, which flashed hungrily here and there, drinking it in.
*falls apart gibbering*
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I hope you didn't hurt yourself when you fell! *Wink*
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
Mmm. that is a pretty image, isn't it? *grin*
You're lovely, and you've made me a happy woman. :)
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*resumes position on floor*
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Let me know if I can get you anything down there!
*hugs*
~L
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