Amazing how much brighter everything seemed once he opened his eyes. I love how we plunge directly back into the narrative in this part. It rolls so easily from the last challenge to this one.
Well, maybe he’d always been free to do it, but this time Harry was aware. The whole tone of this fic and the ones before it has been so gentle, so beautifully shaded. You have a lovely, light touch, which is exactly what this scenario needs.
And to top it all off, it seems smut is on the horizon! Woo hoo! ^_^
No! Don't tell me I have to wait another week for more. Sigh.
I agree with Galadriel about the smooth transition between the last installment and this. And you've set the stage for another into next week's challenge.
I enjoy your Harry. From Blunt fingers with calluses, large knuckles with scratches--a working man’s hand--on that delicate scalp. to The bed was unmade, the pillow still had a crease from Harry’s head. It looked like a typical guy’s bedroom to Harry. Orli apparently saw something a little different.
And I like your Orli, he is deeper, more substantial, and far more interesting than the garden variety Orli.
Yay!! Good, I'm glad that you caught Orli's maturity. That was the first thing that struck me when I was writing the "Dance" drabbles...his patience. He very carefully wore Harry down with nothing more than his company and his love. And he's doing the same thing again with the physical aspects of their relationship.
Very happy it flowed. I was a little worried, since I hadn't had time to read the previous parts before I went away. *sigh of relief*
Glad you liked it!!! Just hope I can do part 5 justice.
I don't remember if I commented on the last 2 of these you did or not, dear heart. I read them ... I know I commented on the first one ... if I did not, I'm an asshole. Really, I am, because I try really hard to always comment on anything I enjoy as much as I am enjoying these. I love that you are making this work. I can't imagine trying to string a series of improvs together like this, get each part to fit into the time frame correctly.
And these are so well done. I am deeply deeply admiring you.
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I love how we plunge directly back into the narrative in this part. It rolls so easily from the last challenge to this one.
Well, maybe he’d always been free to do it, but this time Harry was aware.
The whole tone of this fic and the ones before it has been so gentle, so beautifully shaded. You have a lovely, light touch, which is exactly what this scenario needs.
And to top it all off, it seems smut is on the horizon! Woo hoo! ^_^
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*sigh of relief*
I hadn't had a chance to read the previous parts before going away, so I was nervous, thinking I'd miss something. Glad it flowed.
And thank you!! These two, in this series, just seem to require a delicate touch.
*smiles*
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I agree with Galadriel about the smooth transition between the last installment and this. And you've set the stage for another into next week's challenge.
I enjoy your Harry. From Blunt fingers with calluses, large knuckles with scratches--a working man’s hand--on that delicate scalp. to The bed was unmade, the pillow still had a crease from Harry’s head. It looked like a typical guy’s bedroom to Harry. Orli apparently saw something a little different.
And I like your Orli, he is deeper, more substantial, and far more interesting than the garden variety Orli.
Waiting (im)patiently for more. ^_^
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Very happy it flowed. I was a little worried, since I hadn't had time to read the previous parts before I went away. *sigh of relief*
Glad you liked it!!! Just hope I can do part 5 justice.
*smiles*
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And these are so well done. I am deeply deeply admiring you.
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Thank you!! I'm typing up the last one now. Won't say this hasn't been fun, cause it has, but remind me to never attempt anything like this again.
I'm very happy it's cohesive so far.
*smiles*
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