Comments | contrelamontre: Tempus Fugit (LotR RPS, SB/VM)

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Tempus Fugit (LotR RPS, SB/VM)

Jul 25, 2003 17:23

Title: Tempus Fugit
Author: P.R. Zed
Fandom: LotR RPS
Pairing: SB/VM
Rating: PG
Feedback: Please and thank you
Disclaimer: All lies, damned lies.
Note: For the contrelamontre character development challenge. Written in 63 minutes.

( He looked across the bustling party... )

viggo, bean

Comments 20

thalassatx July 25 2003, 14:26:55 UTC

This is both beautiful and well written. Brought happy tears to my eyes. This is what love is all about.

przed July 25 2003, 20:57:17 UTC

Thanks! I wasn't sure it worked, so I'm glad you liked it.

colleenkane July 25 2003, 14:40:46 UTC

that was so sweet. wow. amazingly intimate and intuitive. thanks!

przed July 25 2003, 20:58:48 UTC

I was trying to show the growth of intimacy between them. So glad it worked for you. and nice icon, BTW

colleenkane July 25 2003, 21:07:40 UTC

aw, thanks! you really did an excellent job. :)

asynje July 25 2003, 14:43:14 UTC

*sigh*

just ..
*sigh*

Those three words at the very end makes the whole thing perfect.
Thank you

przed July 25 2003, 21:00:15 UTC

Thanks.

Those three words at the very end makes the whole thing perfect.

Um, I realized I screwed up the pronoun in those last three words. Been changed now, hopefully for the better.

asynje July 26 2003, 00:36:14 UTC

Hæ hæ

I belong to the psychic readership - that's what I read it as.
Still perfect ;)

cinzia July 25 2003, 15:04:27 UTC

When had an afternoon sketching in his garden while Sean pottered in the flower beds made for a golden memory, burnished to a lustre by constant contemplation?
When had the feeling of Sean's breath on his face first made him realize that more was possible, was necessary, was essential?

and

"You all right?" Sean asked, mouth close to his ear, close enough that the words were felt more than heard.

are just a few of the lines that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside: you captured beautifully everything I love about this pairing. This is perfect, and now excuse me, but I need to read it again. And then again. And so on. :)

*LOVES*

przed July 25 2003, 21:09:41 UTC

you captured beautifully everything I love about this pairing

If I succeeded, it's due in large part to inspiration from the lovely stories you've written capturing exactly this aspect of the pairing. So, thank you so much for your writing.

ladymalen July 25 2003, 16:25:09 UTC

*much happy wibbling*

Wonderful job expressing/writing the emotions!

*sighs happily*

przed July 25 2003, 21:20:58 UTC

Thanks! Always glad to induce wibbling. ;)