Title: Tempus Fugit
Author: P.R. Zed
Fandom: LotR RPS
Pairing: SB/VM
Rating: PG
Feedback: Please and thank you
Disclaimer: All lies, damned lies.
Note: For the
contrelamontre character development challenge. Written in 63 minutes.
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He looked across the bustling party... )
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just ..
*sigh*
Those three words at the very end makes the whole thing perfect.
Thank you
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Those three words at the very end makes the whole thing perfect.
Um, I realized I screwed up the pronoun in those last three words. Been changed now, hopefully for the better.
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I belong to the psychic readership - that's what I read it as.
Still perfect ;)
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When had the feeling of Sean's breath on his face first made him realize that more was possible, was necessary, was essential?
and
"You all right?" Sean asked, mouth close to his ear, close enough that the words were felt more than heard.
are just a few of the lines that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside: you captured beautifully everything I love about this pairing. This is perfect, and now excuse me, but I need to read it again. And then again. And so on. :)
*LOVES*
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If I succeeded, it's due in large part to inspiration from the lovely stories you've written capturing exactly this aspect of the pairing. So, thank you so much for your writing.
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Wonderful job expressing/writing the emotions!
*sighs happily*
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