Thank you thank you! I started this about three times before anything even remotely acceptable came out. It was like, what's harder than writing no dialogue? Writing SorkinFic with no dialogue. :) I'm glad you thought it worked. Thanks again!
Thank you! I'm so blown away that you think it worked -- it was such a gamble for me to try it. But I think it's because Sorkin crafted such wonderful characters -- he builds them with his dialogue, yeah, but the foundation is so strong, so after watching SN as many times as we probably have, these people are all so real. *worships*
Thanks again! And I LOVE your icon, by the way. Eeeee!
As part of my give-more-fb resolution, just popping in to say that I really liked this. Making Dan's distinctive verbal rhythyms into mental ones--so well done, the pacing and the details and the hand signals and...mmm. Very nice.
Oh, and because I'm anal? You missed a 't' in the first sentence of the last section.
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What a great compliment! And I just love Dan -- he's so broken.
the hyper-verbal in an alternate universe
An awesome way of saying that, and it's exactly what I was going for. Thank you so much!
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How the heck did you manage that? And pull it off so well? It worked and was wonderful and...my god, Sports Night without talking. Wow.
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Thanks again! And I LOVE your icon, by the way. Eeeee!
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Oh, and because I'm anal? You missed a 't' in the first sentence of the last section.
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