Next Stop

[hyperfocused]

Next Stop
Fandom: Sports Night
Pairing: Dan/Casey
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Aaron Sorkin owns them, I just collected them for the evening.
Summary: Dan and Casey take a train, and Dan gets things chugging along.
Notes: For the contrelemontre middle of the night challenge. Written in 55 minutes.

Comments

[feelingcold]

that was just perfect.
the characterisation was very good.
the city lights on casey's face was a beautiful image. i liked the hanukah gifts/relationships comparison, and loved the little details, like "(whose name he never could remember; it was Cookie, which ought to have made it easy.)"

i wish i could think of something more to say, but i'm dead tired at the moment.

[alyse]

That was lovely. Thank you for sharing.

[starlitefaerie]

Ahh, Sports Night. One of my first slash loves.

Some great lines, such as and Dan was having a Casey McCall renaissance and Nathalie's name for Casey- so classy of course. I like the details of the gum-sticky seats and Red rectangle green rectangle blue, moving over Casey's still form like the color bars they'd left behind at the station *sighs with the prettiness*. Very nice visuals.