Kiss Me Good-bye

Oct 09, 2010 23:59

Author: evil_queen369
Genre: Angst, horror
Fandom: The GazettE, Kagrra, Nightmare, NEWs/Tegomass
Pairings: Uruha/Aoi
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None, yet.
Chapter: 1/?
Synopsis: Back then I was only six, and even though I was young I knew something bad was going to happen.Comment: Thank you for the comments on the prologue, guys! I really appreciate it. :) The ( Read more... )

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evil_queen369 October 10 2010, 04:01:05 UTC
Reserved for erikaoi

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erikaoi October 10 2010, 05:24:40 UTC
That was fast update.aw now I know why they all there.aw massu with gyoza.hehe.poor uru be ignore by aoi but he so cute thinking that aoi is a monster.

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evil_queen369 October 11 2010, 02:37:08 UTC
It was! lol, but I won't be updating tonight (like I said in my journal). Tomorrow I will. :)

Is it too cliche to make them all have tuberculosis? I was thinking about it, but I decided to go for it anyways.

He'll only be ignored by Aoi for a little bit. Since this story isn't going to be long, Aoi's character may come out more in the next chapter. I'm thinking of doing a time jump, but not too far. It's just not going to go day by day like my other stories. :)

Thank you for commenting, doll~ *squishes* Do I ever thank you? I don't think so, so now I am. xD

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erikaoi October 11 2010, 04:06:03 UTC
aww...I don;t mind time jump at all...you are doing good already and I see you got more comment..so don't worry bout it,...I just watch dvd 1 from diamond concert of news, at intro tegoshi, yamapi, koyama, shige, and ryo making appearance cool but only massu showing his eating habit, he's holding a cake and ice cream and he eats it..gosh massu..everybody keep saying massu got childish image but thats what I love him for...more massu eh in the next chapter..heheheh

dun mention it, when I read this back then I was just finished my psychology test, gosh that was tiring start from 8 until 1 o'clock..gosh so when I read this kinda relax me ...hehehe

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jane_cutieh October 10 2010, 05:33:57 UTC
Awww there goes the overly cute Uruha actions. www adorable just like in NEVERLAND. :)
MAN! AOI IS ONE FREAKY KID!!! lol really, when i read about him titling his head, smiling then lay back down.... "WTF?" came out my mouth. Haha! Scary Aoi.
Thnx for update~

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evil_queen369 October 11 2010, 02:55:35 UTC
Now that I look back on it, I guess Uruha is a lot like he was in Never Land. xD

If you think Aoi's scary now, just wait until he's shown for who he really is~ >=D

Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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syzygy_lestat October 10 2010, 08:57:08 UTC
This is awesome >< The way you describe Uruha's thoughts (the love and hate towards the nurses) and his reactions, his childish way of thinking...is just great T__T I really like the idea of this. Aoi in this chapter was somehow...creepy. Can't wait to see the change inrelationship between them :D
Please write more :D

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evil_queen369 October 11 2010, 02:58:53 UTC
Thank you, honey! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I hope the next one will be just as good! Aoi's character is only going to get weirder as the story progresses. A change in relationship should be interesting, ne?

Thank you for commenting~! :)

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specialkindof October 11 2010, 08:16:19 UTC
reserved spot for comment.do u have problem with erikaoi?if you don’t want to comment then don’t comment.pay respect to the author here and don’t look for a fight.I find some writers reserved a spot or dedicate fic to erikaoi.if she make u don’t want to comment meaning she is bad but if she bad then why some writers like&love her?so read if you want to read,comment if you want because writers love it.don’t u one of writer.so respect her write.

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aya_rockz October 10 2010, 10:58:47 UTC
aww snappish Aoi~ and cute Uruha~
interesting and I want more~ XD

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evil_queen369 October 11 2010, 02:59:34 UTC
More should be up tomorrow. Actually, there may be two chapters up tomorrow if I can manage it. ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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